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poison has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-02-04 09:00 PM.

aight
ima give u some reason not to fuck with me
check it out

i got gats thats made for stickin/
i get more chicks laid than chickens/
cleaning mc's like mades in kitchens/
got rhymes that u cant handle
in a battle, i'll wear u out like a sandle/
my raps glow like a candle
yo i stand out like hair with jell
make u fall out this rap game, oops u just fell
cuz ur rhymes aint well
it wont ring a bell
so shut yo mouth up fore i turn ur life to hell
u'll drop screamin like a roller coster
bust my gat and stick u like a fuckin poster
do i got cash? i get more bread than a toaster
in rap im numba one
my rhymes over cuz i got "FINAL"y done

final has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-03-04 09:26 AM.

this kid claims in his rhymes he spits nothin but venom, shit...../
but the only poisonous liquid he spittin is inside of his dick/(AIDS)

this is not what i expected,this kids rhymes are horrendous/
his flow is so offcourse.........it matches with his record/

those corny raps u bringin aint accepted,that shits despised/
ya record keeps plummiting..........to a steady fast decline/

good luck, bring a real vote not that 3 line explained bs, uppin for some votes peace

Voted For: poison

got gats thats made for stickin/
i get more chicks laid than chickens/
cleaning mc's like mades in kitchens/
got rhymes that u cant handle
in a battle, i'll wear u out like a sandle/
my raps glow like a candle
yo i stand out like hair with jell
make u fall out this rap game, oops u just fell
^^^^^^^^^^^^ OK GOOD NICE FLOW GOING BUT DA PUNCHES U NEED TO WORK ON DAT MAYNE


cuz ur rhymes aint well
it wont ring a bell
so shut yo mouth up fore i turn ur life to hell
u'll drop screamin like a roller coster
bust my gat and stick u like a fuckin poster
do i got cash? i get more bread than a toaster
in rap im numba one
my rhymes over cuz i got "FINAL"y done
^^^^^^^^^^^ GOOD FLOW,,,,,,,,PUNCHES MAYNE ELEVATE ON DAT FO REA'Z


this kid claims in his rhymes he spits nothin but venom, shit...../
but the only poisonous liquid he spittin is inside of his dick/(AIDS)
^^^^^^^^^^^^ OK GOOD PUNCHE FOR AN OPENER MAYNE


this is not what i expected,this kids rhymes are horrendous/
his flow is so offcourse.........it matches with his record/

those corny raps u bringin aint accepted,that shits despised/
ya record keeps plummiting..........to a steady fast decline/
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT MAYNE UR GOOD NICE PUNCHES


AIGHT I THINK FINAL GOT DIS BECUZ OF HARDER PUNCHES AND FLOW

POISON-ELEVATE (NOT SAYIN U SUCK) WORK ON DEM PUNCHES DEN U'LL GET BETTA HOLLA AT ME FOR SOME TIPZ

~PEACE~

FINAL-CAUSE OF HARDER PUNCHES AND FLOW'Z

Switched

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IAM BACK FUCKAH'Z HELL~! NEVA LOOKED SO GOOD

Voted For: final

final good flow and puches good disses also here nice multis also could be better but good still a 6/10
poison opener wack flow off structure fucked up punches and disses aint hit neither punches and disses super weak made you lose here 3/10

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Voted For: poison

uhhhh this battle was pretty wack, but ima have to give this to poison based on punches. Even tho the structure was pretty horrendous, there was alot more depth to poison's spit than final. They both need to work on Creativity alot plus multies are always good to throw in there, but poison's came harder

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Lick Shots=Hitchcock feat Paul Cain and The Sick One
Opposite of Cold= The Cartel
Dear Others=Hitchcock
Kill That Static=Hitchcock

^strobe can you fix that vote up there, he put it in the wrong box by accident i guess(XxToxicXxVerbz)

Voted For: poison

aiiiight
poison gt this
his content was much better, the lines we're short an some what sweet, few decent personals n stuff...
not a bad drop poison, keep em comin an keep elevatin..

final, ya flow was aight, u had like 6 lines tho, i feel ya needed to bring more to the battle, especially when it was an unlimited amount of lines, ya feel me?

no hate, just tellin it how i see it
could yall return the fave in my battle vs WISH with an honest vote?
links in my sig, peace!

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string, how did poisons punches come harder? they were mad corny and not hard at all, and his personal didnt even attack my name, it was just plugged in there to make it look like if he uses my name its a personal...but whatever more votes

yea i kno shotta, i didnt feel i should bring any more lines, i feel i ripped him with those enough, i was really not in a mood to bring anything good out, wanted to get this battle over with...thanks more votes

Voted For: final

this kid claims in his rhymes he spits nothin but venom, shit...../
but the only poisonous liquid he spittin is inside of his dick/(AIDS)
5/10 ... not really feelin this . been flipped so many times ...

this is not what i expected,this kids rhymes are horrendous/
his flow is so offcourse.........it matches with his record/
4/10 ... didnt really rhyme ... whack punch.

those corny raps u bringin aint accepted,that shits despised/
ya record keeps plummiting..........to a steady fast decline/
5/10 ... this didnt really rhyme either .. and you should use his record as an examply twice in a row ...
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i got gats thats made for stickin/
i get more chicks laid than chickens/
[b]2/10 ... wtf. you dont brag about how many people you lay in a battle ...

got rhymes that u cant handle
in a battle, i'll wear u out like a sandle/
1/10 .... no comment ...

yo i stand out like hair with jell
make u fall out this rap game, oops u just fell
1/10 ... wtf ...

cuz ur rhymes aint well
it wont ring a bell
so shut yo mouth up fore i turn ur life to hell
2/10 ... nope

u'll drop screamin like a roller coster
bust my gat and stick u like a fuckin poster
do i got cash? i get more bread than a toaster
3/10 ... haha decent (the toaster part even tho it's played as hell)

in rap im numba one
my rhymes over cuz i got "FINAL"y done
3/10 .. good try ... bur wasnt feelin it.
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poison ... your punches was mad whack kid ... u got to elevate some. use some multis,metaphors ... it was just a boring piece to read.

final ... not very good either .. but u came harder with the punches ... so u get my vote .