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Old 10-09-04, 12:35 AM   #1
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yo smoka joka will alwayts be remembered as an legend ,,,,the lyrical perficionist somtimes he would be hated on but he was still an gangsta& a gentlemen//
i cant believe he died at 19 Why god you let his body decaded and his soul is flown away he left so many peoples not on the internet but his family and friends//


This more sadder dan when my cuzin had to write funereal papers cause his 1st baby died with an heart tragity,,,,,this aint no fake tears my heart is crush its leaking//
like an son lookin at his mother being drowned my heart is being sunked,,,,i cant surpresse my feelings cause this tripute is important wait i gots to get an tissue iam shrieking//(crying)


Yo smoka you wont have any breathin problems while you in heaven cause ther free air ,,,,free space u wont even need lungs//
cause in heaven anything is possible you wont even need an id in heaven to go to clubs security wont break up fights when u throwin dem slugz//

Like kayne-west you went through the fire to get where you at you was an king an legend and you would take drasticmeasurez who-eva tryin to take yo place//
i say you boust to be an legenddary you worth savin and spoken about cause you went throug hard work to get where you are all them rb disagree they just hatin//


Until we meet again bkbrawla endin this tripute to you pourin some liqour for ya like 2-pac said pour some liqour for yo niggas//
iam out puttin an last line to this farewell tripute i'll stay doing my thang until we meet again in the chapter 7 in heaven//

FEED PEEP'Z

EMCEE AND OMB AKA ONE MAN BAND,,,,,,,, BOUST TO BE POSTIN THERE VERSE I DIDNT SEE THEM I HOPE THEY POST THERE VERSES//

IAM OUT~!
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Old 10-09-04, 12:50 AM   #2
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Old 10-09-04, 12:51 AM   #3
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aight heres da deal the RB some of the members dont want smokajoka name on the legendary thread//////i say in i think his name should be posted on the legendary thread
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Old 10-09-04, 05:54 AM   #4
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Old 10-09-04, 09:02 AM   #5
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um ^^^^^^^^^^^ put some explanation why u didnt like it maybe i'll know what to do when i post an next open mic~!
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Old 10-09-04, 09:18 AM   #6
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Alright. Did you even know smoka well enough to be writing a dedication to him in open mic?
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Old 10-09-04, 09:20 AM   #7
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^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ Errrrr Yep Back In Rb Days (re-launce)
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Old 10-09-04, 09:44 AM   #8
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O ok.

Well as for the drop. Some lines were kinda stretched, and your structure was all over the place. But the meaning was good.

I guess I sorta liked it.
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Old 10-09-04, 09:48 AM   #9
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O Ok Thanks Mayne I Need To Elevate Usin Tha God Damn Struture Lol
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Old 10-09-04, 10:04 AM   #10
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How long have you been on the net writing for?

Because if you had been on RB for long enough to know these people well, I would have thought you would of elevated more.....?
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Old 10-09-04, 10:12 AM   #11
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I Havent Been On The Net That Damn Long Ya Know But I Seen Smokajoka Batttles And Pluz I Talk To Him And Shit~! He Always Be Makin Jokes About Me And My Bad Struture~! He Was An Good Friend He Always Tell Me "keep Yo Pride Up"~!

3 Yrs Off Da Net Dats Long Mayne I Been On Rb And Re-launch For 2 Yrs Den I Stoped Cause I Had Lots To Do And Everything~!
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