k, after my battles r done (since i pretty much lost....) im callin it quits.... i guess rappin just aint for me.... ill miss summa ya ShoTTa, Desert, yall showed a lotta respect even though i was lost. i wrote a freestyle.... my last freestyle.... thanx 4 tha support.... see ya...

i know im not the greatest rapper, but show respect cause i tried/
but after all the shit, im thru with it, and its time to say goodbye/
i had a few supporters, but a lotta haters with no dignity/
i had my word and my pride, but yall took it away from me/
i tried real hard to prove to u i can do it/
but i guess my "biting lyrics" just kinda blew it/
i may come back some other time, but til then 'rest is history/
i was who i was, and no one took that away from me/
a lotta peeps hated me and talked shit behind my back/
run off and told ur friends 2 vote against me cause my shit is wack/
but now that the time has come, i just wanted 2 set shit straight/
im leavin the rap game as of now, so NOW u can all hate.....

PEACE!

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DeTiCaTeD To A TrUe LyRiCiSt

girl ud be tight as hell if u hadnt used my mans lines in ur shit. jus wanted to let ya kno that b4 u left.

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thanx.... this is my last week... so please read this.... id like sum feedback.....

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feedback please. im leavin 4 now.... i just wanna c wut yall think of my final online rap.....

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DeTiCaTeD To A TrUe LyRiCiSt

Lol.. No one is dope as fuck when they first start off.. You gotta keep elevating and getting better.. I can tell your already getting your structure down..

But Rome wasnt build in a day.. Remember that..

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aight, that free style was good, i like it. first off everyone on this site when they first started out had hatters... people called them noobs and herbs.. they got hated on and discouraged. but the ones that are left and have big winning records can hold their heads high and say "ya know what, even tho they hated on me at first, i made it..." and that is what counts. i like your free style, it shows elevation. the structure is there, your pretty much right on with that. it sounds more like a poem tho, the way it flows.... that kinda stuff can be fixed. it wont all happen at once, elevation can take a week or a year... if your serious about wanting to battle, dont quit... keep elevating and then go back to all the haters and battle them and shut them up. dont quit just because you lost a few battles... show them you can do it.

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dont leave foreal....u got skills girl....like the kid said u cant be da best right away....but u def got some wordplay and structure which is more then some of these kids...u good u def should stay...hell if u want help im willin to help u plus im sure the rest of dees kids are 2....jus pm me before u decide to do nething ok....

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hmm.... thanx everybody, but im losin 3 MORE FUCKIN BATTLES!!! *sob* my record will b even WORSE than it already is...... 2-8? im gonna git so much shit if i go on..... thanx 4 tha luv though... i respect that..... ill keep it in mind

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... get an alias... if thats the only way to keep elevating, get a new name at 0-0. lol but try and keep tha name u have... more respect that way

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ya.... uppin 4 feeback PLEASE!!!!

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Sup that was nice I think you would be better suited at topicals I can
see you got that kinda vibe in your writing, but whats the point leaving
coz you got haters? You have made them win if you leave but I like the
freestyle...

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thanx.... uppin for feedback!!!

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