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Old 10-04-04, 09:13 AM   #1
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Feels So Good...

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"Feels So Good" ("You're So Amazing") Ms.Skillz (2003)

I am here with you and you are here with me.. My goodness
This is just.. Just.. Just beautiful.
When I look at you,
I really can't help but stare
Because you are just so amazing and your energy is everywhere.
Oh.. And did I tell you how much you amaze me?
I long to feel you,
So I reach out to you and oh do you take me
This is no mistake, see..
We are here to complement each other.. And so it is done..
Now let us become one.
No.. We "are" one.. So let us simply express our oneness
Ommm.. I take you in
And yes
I must admit, I am sooo impressed
No. I am more or less..
Entranced.. As our spirits dance
To the rhythms of Ur,
You hit a spot in my soul and my subconscious begins to slur..
My double emerges from the depths of all that I am
And if I didn't expect all things in advance,
I quite honestly would believe none of what I am feeling,
What I am seeing.
Yes, yes!
Take me, take me!
Make me
Remember why I even chose to come here
You make my toes spiral as U breathe Truth into my ear..
Oh wait. I see my reflection in your eyes
And the very realization pierces
Through the core of my existence like a knife..
Before, they were merely words,
But now, I really innerstand how it feels to be given
"The Kiss of Life"..
Yes..
You gave me the kiss of life and I cherish that
Around you, within me is where it's at
Oh hold up. Didn't I just do that object of the preposition thing?
Nah. You ain't even sweatin' that, and you tell me
The truth is that within me, perfect are all things..
Aww. You so sweet.
U kiss my crown and even inspire the soles of my feet
I am so glad I know you
And that is why noone can arrest this
Asomatous development
Our oneness is an autonomous settlement
And never are you found guilty of embezzlement..
If anything, you give so unselfishly
You give all that you've got
And you've got "infinity"
The beauty of this arrangement, birthed in balance
Is quite literally "symmetry"
Wow..
All this inspired by 15 minutes of sitting down with you
Thank you so much.
I love and adore you, Nature. U're beautiful and never will I lose touch.

If you couldn't tell before now, this poem is about NATURE.. Written a while back when I went to the river.. Nature does a spirit good...
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Old 10-04-04, 03:40 PM   #2
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WOW.... nuff said...holla at me... i'm on my way back to Iraq so no comp for about 2-3 days... see ya then
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Old 10-04-04, 06:58 PM   #3
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damn, this was incredible, you have a wonderful spirit and it shows in your writing, you have a lot to say and i enjoy reading your work, keep em coming.....1
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Old 10-04-04, 07:05 PM   #4
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u good at "poetry" and raps.... i underestimated u i guess... u pretty tight, grl. keep it up.
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