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Old 09-21-04, 11:49 PM   #1
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SenseR - Battle Me?!?...

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this track aint done but is comin along pretty damn good if you ask me..its based on how you dont wanna battle...my second verse is in the works 1st verse i decided to display like 3 flows in one..and second its gonna have a regular flow of mine wit punchlines and meta 4z..so dont sleep on this..imma make this a good track..but peep what i got so far iight people 1ne...

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you dont wanna step//(Whattt!!)
you dont wanna get wet//
wit my spit smell the liquor up under my breath bitch//
see im sick well equipped to rip ya shit quick//
tell ya chick im the prick she now has ta lick//
cuz ya slipped you aint wanna battle me//
see my strategy rip through ya anatomy//
bet ya whole salary aint no one bad as me//
i have the pleed instanity boss//
ya undefeated?..but you finally lost//

1st Verse

soon as my verse begins my thirst within //
ta hurt cha chin wit lines i've never swurved wit pens//
on the side lines guys eye burst and twitch//
i design rhymes that could merk this bitch//
quick when i flip swift when i spit//
switch on tip of a mask murder//
in ya ass i blast further up//
teedius needed lyricsss..up in butt
indeed im concieted as fuck when i bust what bust//
you gon get eated defeated when im weeded time speedin//
rhymes needed to beat in skull im proceedin the leathalest flow//
wit the leathalest blow up ta nose blood gush on ya clothes//
now i get rushed by the hoes, wit the thrust similar ta whats on a boat//
whoaa.i suppose im clutch under oath yo//
wanna boast im nuts wit the toast//
even though yall dumb muthafuckas dont know lets go...

Chorus

you dont wanna step//(Whattt!!)
you dont wanna get wet//
wit my spit smell the liquor up under my breath bitch//
see im sick well equipped to rip ya shit quick//
tell ya chick im the prick she now has ta lick//
cuz ya slipped you aint wanna battle me//
see my strategy rip through ya anatomy//
bet ya whole salary aint no one bad as me//
i have the pleed instanity boss//
ya undefeated?..but you finally lost//

2nd Verse

my flows sick, buts its alil different then magic//
but no different then what some hoe done slipped in ta magic//
you'd get zipped in a plastic if ya thinkin of attackin//
so dont spit what chu rappin cuz'll rip it so tragic//
im the badest, and that is, fact not a opinion//
you'd get smacked by my minions for the cash like im pimpin//
these slutty rappers so buddy back up//
i bust these raps cuz,
its funny how these dummies think money'll love you that much//
dont get clapped up slow mo nigga cuz ya homo//
im stackin figgas cuz i had delivered and sold dope//
stab ya liver & ya clique up now ya niggas is no more//
stomp this bitch up wit some kickers from some fuckin dojoe//
listen this promo as a artist solo//
in case yall bitches dont know im finna fuckin blow hoe//
try me thats a no no i pack a 4, 4//
to give shots to ya face like some chick in a porno// nigga!..


Chorus

you dont wanna step//(Whattt!!)
you dont wanna get wet//
wit my spit smell the liquor up under my breath bitch//
see im sick well equipped to rip ya shit quick//
tell ya chick im the prick she now has ta lick//
cuz ya slipped you aint wanna battle me//
see my strategy rip through ya anatomy//
bet ya whole salary aint no one bad as me//
i have the pleed instanity boss//
ya undefeated?..but you finally lost//

1ne,...
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Old 09-22-04, 02:54 AM   #2
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LMAO @ the beat......I'm about to drop a free on this shit..........anyway, shit was ok. I liked the flow......honestly, the shit was nice. You should have made the chorus stand out a little more, but htat's about it.........
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Old 09-24-04, 12:07 PM   #3
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iight yall this shit is done..peep it again to peep the finished version iight holla 1ne..
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Old 09-29-04, 02:30 PM   #4
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love the beat-- I think I used it in Got Skillz Tourney... flow was on point, pretty decent production- lyrically it wasn't very engaging- iunno what it was, but thats just me- Not your best stuff, but still better than most on the site delivery wise. stay up
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Old 09-29-04, 02:58 PM   #5
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real nice drop mayne... im likin the beat... keep it up..
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Old 09-30-04, 01:28 AM   #6
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naw i didnt use that beat for that tourny,..but good looks on the feedback yall..its appreciated..1ne.
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Old 09-30-04, 05:01 AM   #7
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I Really Liked This Especially The Chorus ... Can't Get It Outta Ma Head ... You Don't Wanna Step (Whattt!), lol Good Shit. Keep Droppin.................................
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Old 10-03-04, 01:52 AM   #8
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very nice drop man... verbals right, cant get that shit outta my head lol.
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