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Old 02-27-06, 08:06 PM   #1
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yo this is some wierd shit i wrote to this beat..... i can never really use it for a song becuase its kinda wierd and shit.....but yup here it is.....i wrote it to this beat that had 2 verses... the first verse was 22 bars and the second verse was 16......the chorus had a sample of some alien type nioses..... i might record htis song but prolly not...

Enter at your own will but still but still but still
Remember that I’m sic Yes I’m ill ill ill ill
Have you ever been buried alive by another kind
Of life that we feel could never ever survive
In this world of strife filled with abnormal fear
There everywhere just look in the glare of your bedroom mirror
Beware before you stare and actually catch a glimpse
That’s where I went wrong and I haven’t been the same ever since
Some refuse to believe that people have actually seen
Flying machines not created by human beings
All of these things that you don’t know
Like the locnes monster, big foot and U.F.O’s
They’re there but we try to think there not
Like the unexplainable circles found in crops
Whether or not they say there’s no life beyond the stars
Scientist assume that we can survive on mars
I show no regards this is no holds bars
How can you explain the creatures in those closed jars?
Phenomenal excuses provided by area 51
Its not there but has guards ready with there guns
Pathological liars say these things can’t exist
Conspiracy theories, urban legends, and myths


As I awake I can hardly feel my face
I can only taste that my organs have been misplaced
Eyes and ears sued shut with finger prints erased
In this interplanetary space with an unknown race
With intentions to make me feel like a fagot
Trying to perform anal probe with there hi tech gadgets
I wouldn’t have it so they pretended to murder me
It was tragic as I hung by my throat vertically
I swallowed acid until it basically burned to breathe
To the third degree then they began to do surgery
All I remember is nothing but black smoke
Them branding there initials inside my brain capsule
Its was cruel and unusual punishment in another galaxy
Facing Brutal fatalities until I was woke gradually
As a suffering causality I finally realize
I’m running out of oxygen and I’ve been buried alive
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Old 03-01-06, 01:45 AM   #2
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umm yea read this shit...... BITCHES
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Old 03-02-06, 04:13 PM   #3
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Old 03-02-06, 09:01 PM   #4
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shit was pretty good, i do believe there is life beyond the stars. how the bloody hell we going 2 be the only beings in a fuckin galaxy that is a crock of shit.
but still i liked this piece alot it had meaning and u should send that piece to the mother fuckin scientist in 51 and say that they can shove it up there ass tryin' to hide them mother fuckin aliens from us.
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Old 03-03-06, 02:16 AM   #5
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^^ good lookin out...thanks for the love.
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Old 03-03-06, 11:10 AM   #6
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Drop another link homie ..but other then that yea this was a pretty decent drop i felt you could have put alittle more emotion in the drop but you nice imagery, and very good feling going into your drop i was really feeling it , nice structure , wordplay and vocab was decent could have been expanded alittle more but overall nice job.
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Old 03-03-06, 08:02 PM   #7
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Becuase it was ment to be a song.... when you hear the song you can hear the emotion and all that,....... just figured it would be stupid to record something that would not be going on my Cd........so i posted it on here...
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