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Old 10-02-04, 08:13 PM   #1
Detrimental
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Lightbulb Life

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Judge: Ryan Brogan, you've been sentenced life in prison,with your uncle
Me: I DIDN'T DO ANTHING MAN WHaT THE FUCK, FUCK ALL YOU MOTHA FUCKIN DICK SUCKAS!

Verse One
I've had 7 felonies already and do i need a felony 1?
Sentenced life of manditory prison n' brought out hell in me with guns
In n' out of jail cells and been in n' out of hell n' i don't got a job
Failed again but nothin keeps me from prayin to God
Bein institutionalized n' i realize that i only need God in my life
Behind my eyes is another side of me but people never hear my cries
And i wish i'd die but i know i got a purpose in this world
But my life has only been a wind of whirls
I got no ointment i'm poisened n' hearin voices
With only Heaven n' Hell bein my choices
Hopin to die and for it to be qickly
I'm just hopin to die swiftly
And everyone who's caused me troulbe i'm bringin with me
Feelin a little queazy and feelin a little tipsy
I'm feelin like my heart is ripping
And my life is chipping into somethin i never wanted with me
Feelin like nobody can jypt me while my whole worlds flipping
Sooner or later i'm a fall off this ledge i'm gripping
I know i aint tripping cuz i feel everyone's against me n'....
I feel like this world is evil and the people fenced me in

Chorus
We already doin life in a world that's tipsy
None of us realize how ths world is flipping
And ripping and just tearin away
Just grab a joint and relax with me today
(x2)

Verse Two
People judign me cuz i'm skinny
The streets are hideous, none of them are pretty
In this nitty gritty world of lies
There's no pitty while people dyin world wide
Cops slippin thru the system, they try to strip me of my pride
They tryin to get to me quickly before i'm institutionalized
And i can't lie and say i'm an angel when i'm only a servant
With constant service
To the one and only, undistputed with common certousy
Can't think of anything worse than me cuz i got the devil cursin me
It seemed to be my uncle first then me with cops with thirst of greed
Why'd my mom give birth to me, i just wish i'd be in the dirt you'd see
That this Earth wasn't meant for me even though God says i got a purpose
People say i should live life to the fullest but it aint even worth it
Cuz the devils gone and cursed it and got me sentenced life in prison
Learnin somethin but these bitches don't know how the fuck we livin
Cuz we know we've been driven to a life of hell
That's why i tell these kids to slow it down cuz they don't want in jail

Chorus
We already doin life in a world that's tipsy
None of us realize how ths world is flipping
And ripping and just tearin away
Just grab a joint and relax with me today
(x2 and fades)
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Old 10-02-04, 09:16 PM   #2
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come on.....i need some feedback.....you can give all feedback to everyone else and overlook me? damn.....you seen my other shit......this can be just as fuckin good......give me some feedback please
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Old 10-02-04, 10:32 PM   #3
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uppin for feedback.....don't sleep on this......i need feedback please
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Old 10-02-04, 11:04 PM   #4
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yo dis shit is mad good, dis is a great poem, dog it has a nice flow and structure. it also has a great story and a true story. dawg u should have dat shit on audio aite, good shit overall
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