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10-02-04, 08:13 PM | #1 | |||||||
Detrimental Thoughts
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Judge: Ryan Brogan, you've been sentenced life in prison,with your uncle
Me: I DIDN'T DO ANTHING MAN WHaT THE FUCK, FUCK ALL YOU MOTHA FUCKIN DICK SUCKAS! Verse One I've had 7 felonies already and do i need a felony 1? Sentenced life of manditory prison n' brought out hell in me with guns In n' out of jail cells and been in n' out of hell n' i don't got a job Failed again but nothin keeps me from prayin to God Bein institutionalized n' i realize that i only need God in my life Behind my eyes is another side of me but people never hear my cries And i wish i'd die but i know i got a purpose in this world But my life has only been a wind of whirls I got no ointment i'm poisened n' hearin voices With only Heaven n' Hell bein my choices Hopin to die and for it to be qickly I'm just hopin to die swiftly And everyone who's caused me troulbe i'm bringin with me Feelin a little queazy and feelin a little tipsy I'm feelin like my heart is ripping And my life is chipping into somethin i never wanted with me Feelin like nobody can jypt me while my whole worlds flipping Sooner or later i'm a fall off this ledge i'm gripping I know i aint tripping cuz i feel everyone's against me n'.... I feel like this world is evil and the people fenced me in Chorus We already doin life in a world that's tipsy None of us realize how ths world is flipping And ripping and just tearin away Just grab a joint and relax with me today (x2) Verse Two People judign me cuz i'm skinny The streets are hideous, none of them are pretty In this nitty gritty world of lies There's no pitty while people dyin world wide Cops slippin thru the system, they try to strip me of my pride They tryin to get to me quickly before i'm institutionalized And i can't lie and say i'm an angel when i'm only a servant With constant service To the one and only, undistputed with common certousy Can't think of anything worse than me cuz i got the devil cursin me It seemed to be my uncle first then me with cops with thirst of greed Why'd my mom give birth to me, i just wish i'd be in the dirt you'd see That this Earth wasn't meant for me even though God says i got a purpose People say i should live life to the fullest but it aint even worth it Cuz the devils gone and cursed it and got me sentenced life in prison Learnin somethin but these bitches don't know how the fuck we livin Cuz we know we've been driven to a life of hell That's why i tell these kids to slow it down cuz they don't want in jail Chorus We already doin life in a world that's tipsy None of us realize how ths world is flipping And ripping and just tearin away Just grab a joint and relax with me today (x2 and fades)
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10-02-04, 09:16 PM | #2 | |||||||
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come on.....i need some feedback.....you can give all feedback to everyone else and overlook me? damn.....you seen my other shit......this can be just as fuckin good......give me some feedback please
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10-02-04, 10:32 PM | #3 | |||||||
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uppin for feedback.....don't sleep on this......i need feedback please
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10-02-04, 11:04 PM | #4 | |||||
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yo dis shit is mad good, dis is a great poem, dog it has a nice flow and structure. it also has a great story and a true story. dawg u should have dat shit on audio aite, good shit overall
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