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GKillaz05 5 83.33%
DeNounced 1 16.67%
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Old 05-24-04, 02:00 PM   #1
DeNounced
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From: Sacramento...
....GKillaz05-vs-DeNounced....

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10 lines...
no bitch shit...
drop it...
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im gone for 3 centurys 2 decades and five years...
then the name De' appears and queers start sheddin tears...
catchin peers,man's sweatin of shear fear...
when i interfere,im closer than i may appear like rearview mirrors...
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Old 05-24-04, 02:33 PM   #2
GKillaz05
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From: CANADA
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Im Stickin A Fork In DeNounced Cuz His Ass Is Already Done...
First Line And Your Already OutDone, Your Screamin GKillaz Won...
This Battle Is Over Before It Even Begun, Should I Even Go On...
He See's My Spit And His Member Status Goes From Online to Withdrawn...
My Punches Are Like A Knucke Sandwhich Tell Me How It Tasted...
Your Trash Dawg Your Occupation Is Always Being Wasted...
Now You Know Why He Stunk Like A Stunk Cuz He Always Drunk (look in his profile)
My Punches Are Comin Down Hard On You Like A Slam Dunk...
YOur A Punk And A Faggot No Way YOur Ever Gun Be A Winner...
From The First Line Ive Served You For Breakfast, Lunch and Dinner...

BLAH! Havnt Battled In Awhile so Ima little Rusty, Ah Well.. BRING DA HEAT!
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Old 05-24-04, 03:15 PM   #3
DeNounced
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From: Sacramento...
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aye i just got back,im all busy and shit,ill get this dropped today though....dont worry....
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im gone for 3 centurys 2 decades and five years...
then the name De' appears and queers start sheddin tears...
catchin peers,man's sweatin of shear fear...
when i interfere,im closer than i may appear like rearview mirrors...
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Old 05-24-04, 03:56 PM   #4
DeNounced
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From: Sacramento...
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dawg,im rusty as fuck i dont even battle anymore...


your gay,and im relentless,you 'strugglin to pass lines' like speech impediments-
your name is similar with whack realivence,and you couldnt 'drop a case' if you had the proof & evidence-

grab a tampon and light the string,cause thats the only way your 'lines are fire'-
i hope kanye's your freind,cause thats the only this battles 'close to the wire'-

call me daddy man your gettin 'sonned',im smashin this mans cells like i was parkinson's!-
flow?,you got none,worst rapper of all time,CONGRATULATIONS ON BEING NUMBER 1-

this man needs a crutch,im about to 'de-tatch' your 'joints' like prosthetic legs-
id smash you in real life,but i dont think its right to attack gays-

fuck this cat,have you seein more 'red' in 'white' lights than your home flag-
you sport rags,ive just 'buried' this cat like sandstorms in afghanistan!-



told you i was rusty...lets see votes...
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im gone for 3 centurys 2 decades and five years...
then the name De' appears and queers start sheddin tears...
catchin peers,man's sweatin of shear fear...
when i interfere,im closer than i may appear like rearview mirrors...
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Old 05-24-04, 04:48 PM   #5
GKillaz05
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From: CANADA
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Old 05-24-04, 07:11 PM   #6
GKillaz05
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Lets Get Some More VOTES! Make Em Honest And Explained!
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Old 05-24-04, 07:18 PM   #7
King Solo
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The rules do not state that crew votes are disallowed
so i'm gonna drop an honest line to line breakdown vote
when the admins check don't ban me cuz i ain't just gonna drop a vote cuz we crew but if u want to cancel it then that's aight!!!

Im Stickin A Fork In DeNounced Cuz His Ass Is Already Done...
First Line And Your Already OutDone, Your Screamin GKillaz Won...
6...pretty weak opener, shit is played son!!
This Battle Is Over Before It Even Begun, Should I Even Go On...
He See's My Spit And His Member Status Goes From Online to Withdrawn...
6...weak again, u still got that shit about u got him beat wit a few lines and that shit doesn't work man!!
My Punches Are Like A Knucke Sandwhich Tell Me How It Tasted...
Your Trash Dawg Your Occupation Is Always Being Wasted...
5...weak for u G, u really are rusty!!
Now You Know Why He Stunk Like A Stunk Cuz He Always Drunk (look in his profile)
My Punches Are Comin Down Hard On You Like A Slam Dunk...
5...ok stunk like a stunk...WTF??? and the structure was off!!
YOur A Punk And A Faggot No Way YOur Ever Gun Be A Winner...
From The First Line Ive Served You For Breakfast, Lunch and Dinner...
7...best line, nice closer but the homo shit...played!!


your gay,and im relentless,you 'strugglin to pass lines' like speech impediments-
your name is similar with whack realivence,and you couldnt 'drop a case' if you had the proof & evidence-
7...nice multi but the punch needs some work!!
grab a tampon and light the string,cause thats the only way your 'lines are fire'-
i hope kanye's your freind,cause thats the only this battles 'close to the wire'-
6...pretty weak and first line is pretty played!!
call me daddy man your gettin 'sonned',im smashin this mans cells like i was parkinson's!-
flow?,you got none,worst rapper of all time,CONGRATULATIONS ON BEING NUMBER 1-
5...didn't really get that line pretty weak!!
this man needs a crutch,im about to 'de-tatch' your 'joints' like prosthetic legs-
id smash you in real life,but i dont think its right to attack gays-
4...shit rhyme and structure was well off!!
fuck this cat,have you seein more 'red' in 'white' lights than your home flag-
you sport rags,ive just 'buried' this cat like sandstorms in afghanistan!-
6...basic closer, needs improvement!!


POINTS TOTALS

GKillaz05 - 29/50...u came pretty weak in that spit playa!!
DeNouNced - 28/50...u came weak to but GKilla had u beat slightly!!

V/ - GKillaz05
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Old 05-24-04, 11:26 PM   #8
DeNounced
Flyweight
 
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From: Sacramento...
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lmao,on your breakdown,it seemed i was better,and you cant drop points on me cause you didnt get a line,that parkinsons line was hot,read it again knowing that parkinsons is a disease that destroys brain cells...
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im gone for 3 centurys 2 decades and five years...
then the name De' appears and queers start sheddin tears...
catchin peers,man's sweatin of shear fear...
when i interfere,im closer than i may appear like rearview mirrors...
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Old 05-25-04, 09:47 AM   #9
LyricalMethod
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i liked denounced verse better. it hink he came harder and way better punches. his verse was more together, better structure. return the fava

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Old 05-31-04, 11:31 AM   #10
GKillaz05
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UPPIN for VOTES, WILL RETURN THE FAV!!
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Old 05-31-04, 02:10 PM   #11
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From: Rochester for now
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i would have to say that gkilla took this

gkilla.......your punches are okay but you could reword them so that they hit harder and stick better........your strtucture could use some work becuase i didnt really like it but your flow was okay even thought you structure was a little off.....keep elevating man.....not a bad verse

De...........your punches didnt really hit that hard in this battle i say and you could reword them aswell......keep elevating and dont space your bars out like that it takes away from your flow and makes it choppy

v/Gkilla
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Old 06-04-04, 12:00 AM   #12
GKillaz05
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From: CANADA
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UPPIN for VOTES
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Old 06-06-04, 09:03 PM   #13
GKillaz05
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UPPIN for VOTES!
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Old 06-11-04, 03:01 PM   #14
V.I.P..
Flyweight
 
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From: Roxbury massachusetts
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flow gkillas

vocab deounced

punches both tie

humor by a hair gkillas

overall vote g killas

nice battle yall lookin forward to anotha
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Old 10-16-04, 06:07 PM   #15
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Quote:
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i would have to say that gkilla took this

gkilla.......your punches are okay but you could reword them so that they hit harder and stick better........your strtucture could use some work becuase i didnt really like it but your flow was okay even thought you structure was a little off.....keep elevating man.....not a bad verse

De...........your punches didnt really hit that hard in this battle i say and you could reword them aswell......keep elevating and dont space your bars out like that it takes away from your flow and makes it choppy

v/Gkilla


i actually agree with this breakdown a lot..................so
no need to explain something two times in a row right????
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