Battle Rules:

6 Lines
No Crew Votes/DR Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Feedin

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-10-04 at 06:15 PM

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Dopeman has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-10-04 05:19 PM.

Sten. Cell has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-10-04 05:19 PM.

We'll Say You've Gotten Better But Not Exactly A Text Brawler
Im Mean Yea You've Elevated A Little But In The Sense Of Gettin Taller
I Suppose Im Lucky,This "Thug" Could Have Me Beat Up
Its A Wonder How Ya Run Your Mouth & Ya Tongue Keeps Up
Check The Dates,Its Father's Day,Son-Days Come At The End Of Weeks
So In The End,To Show Off Your Scars You'll Have To Spread Your Cheeks

this faggots addicted to ''nuts'' like the squirrel on his site..
lil midget gettin fucked over by other dwarfs like snow-white..
everybody hide ya rhymes cause this boy might bite..
an if he dosent he should, or at least get somebody to ghostwrite!...
ya rhymes are about as tight as gary coleman in shaqs jersey..
stick n stone will brake ya bones an thats prolly why you ''beggin for mercy''..


Explanation: if anybody is familiar with this kid he has his own site an soon as you open the link to his site there is somthin about nuts an squirrel email or somthin

aight i forgot the explanation, if anybody is familiar with this kid he has his own site an soon as you open the link to his site there is somthin about nuts an squirrel email or somthin..

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Voted For: Sten. Cell

Sten. Cell

decent verse, good structure, good flow, no multis, attempted wordplay, most of it didnt come out good though, like, one of ur punches connected, one of the other ones was played, the other sucked, no good personals

Dopeman

decent verse as well, good structure, good flow, no multis, i liked that wordplay with shaq and coleman, havent heard that before, the dwarfs line was decent, ghostwrite was played, beggin for mercy didnt make sense, no good personals

Overall

both had a good structure, both had a good flow, neither had multis, neither had good personals, Dopeman had the better wordplay i thought, cause that shaq line was creative, and i just liked it, Dopeman also had the better punch, as only 1 punch in both verses connected, Dopemans dwarf line beat the spread ur cheeks punch, so basing off of that, Dopeman gets my vote

VOTE - DOPEMAN

Please return the favor with an honest vote on the link in my sig.

Vote Switched

Oh shit, i accidentally typed that in the wrong box

just take it to the RV community complaints and strobe will change it

werd.

yup, already done that.........
upin this battle
g'luck sten

o an aye, aint a sten a gun?

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upin yall...............!
dont sleep an honest votes will be returned

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Voted For: Dopeman

dope i wunt 2 sqwash da beef we had so iam voting 4 u cuz i liked yo shaw line dat wuz hot so we cool? sten cell yo verse wuz tight 2 but dat shaw line killed u homie dawg dope winz diz

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wtf? shaw line? shut the hell up
squash what beef? we dont have beef....
your a retard, simple....

upin yall..

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Voted For: Dopeman

Ok ima drop an honest vote...here it comes

Sten. Cell

We'll Say You've Gotten Better But Not Exactly A Text Brawler
Im Mean Yea You've Elevated A Little But In The Sense Of Gettin Taller
weak punch
I Suppose Im Lucky,This "Thug" Could Have Me Beat Up
Its A Wonder How Ya Run Your Mouth & Ya Tongue Keeps Up
kinda weird sounds like in the 1st line u admit he could have ya 2nd lind was an aight punch though
Check The Dates,Its Father's Day,Son-Days Come At The End Of Weeks
So In The End,To Show Off Your Scars You'll Have To Spread Your Cheeks
ouch a good punch there

Dopeman

this faggots addicted to ''nuts'' like the squirrel on his site..
lil midget gettin fucked over by other dwarfs like snow-white..
nice opener good punch

everybody hide ya rhymes cause this boy might bite..
an if he dosent he should, or at least get somebody to ghostwrite!...
ha ha another aight punch there good flow
ya rhymes are about as tight as gary coleman in shaqs jersey..
stick n stone will brake ya bones an thats prolly why you ''beggin for mercy''..
hmm nice closer 1st line was dope 2nd line playin off G-Unit was aight good playin

I'm goin wit Dopeman because in an HONEST opinion i think he got this battle wit stronger punches and better wordplay Sten. Cell u still need a lil work but u gettin there

There's my sig hit up umm...Trentorican vs me

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