replace the mishaps wit sick raps, stick wacks on my penis like a dick wrap, so get lift back, insert six tacks in ya brain, n leave a big map, pimp smack ya face and leave ya bitch trapped, wit a slit back, and a thick gash, across her fore head, used forcepts and left her on the floor dead, next to four steps as more sweat dripped down my face as i saw red, hoped in the corvette, haven't closed the door yet, looked back, realized i left suttin at the drawer bed, still awoken choped her wit a hand blade, my man made, a mistake so you can say, we ran a planned raid, of her house took her tanned shades, threw em in the garbage along with her land scapes, we can't wait, thought it was a grand day, but left with band aids, with my maynaoise on her own body near her damn legs





Sirens explode, and im high in the zone, when i pass away, am i dYIn alone, for sins i commited, while I'm lying at home, i sit and think, am i cryin who knows, look up in the sky, see a burst of glare, am i the first to stare, at the worst whos there, or take a curse of dares, with me till my thrist is scarce, facing the verse of scares, throught my entire lifetime, i write rhymes, to kill people who aren't in their right minds, just like me, insanity demanded me to be branded frantically, handleing bodys so scantilly and doin it rampidly, wheeew this was a quick one and you thought you could dismanlte me, you not on the same level fuck so forget about handlin me, cause i just crushed you got killed easily

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Wow

Must Have Sucked

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That was good. You have a good range of multi's and you had a story line to it. It's tech as fuck. flowed nice.. Do you do audio?

it was str8yo hit up my open mic, cruelty, iite 1

waddup nah it didnt suck it was fuckin hot i like it a lot it flowed real good. it kinda had an eminem feel to it but thats not a bad thing. keep it up playa

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yeah ice i liked it...sometimes it was like a run on sentence but if you had mad breath controle it would sound really dope audio..this would be a dope audio piece n is a good text piece....not often they good in both catagories...good job..

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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!