Gimme some feedback...

Looks like a case of da over v da underrated,
Watch da so-called ill get his rhymes desacrated,
Flows left metaphysically lacerated, yo i
See you losin wasn't really anticipated...and
Why was dat?It's because you fell into my trap, all
Thinkin i was wack til i came and bus back, wid
Flows automatically declarin me da victor,
Measurin a 12.0 on da Richter,
Yo you jus a switchblade, i'm Excaliber, spittin
Shots in excess of 45 caliber
BOOM!..Step back!Gimme some room, and
From dis day forward don't ever assume, cos
I take my time to perfect my rhymes, i
Let em think i'm dull then BLAM!!! I shine,
Leavin them blind, straight physically knock up, well they
Say assumption is da mother of all fuck ups,
...And you fucked up real bad,
Dumb motherfucker you was easily had, yo I've
Been flowin for as long as i can remember so
What makes you think i couldn't lyrically dismember
You...your chick, and your whole crew,
Don't take time to think a lot,now,do you?
Nah i didn't think so, bredrin it shows, if you
Had sense you wouldn't want to come to blows, yo i'm
Explosive i lyrically cause pain, Still
Choosin to fuck wid me, you must be insane, yo
Plead insanity and i may let you go, Shit!!
Who am i kiddin?I don't spare my foes

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