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Old 10-07-04, 01:17 PM   #1
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blah heres some of my stuff i did a long ass
time ago...listen to "THESE SPECIFIC SONGS" and leave me
feedback on "THESE SONGS SPECIFIC SONGS":

"The Return" "Who Am I" "Back!" "The Truth"
"What You Gonna Do <--This is a battle against L.I, just for fun though "

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/8/efusiveonemusic.htm

When you listen to those i would like some detailed feedback...
likes and dis-likes, no 1-2 line explainations...or you can give me
feed on the remixes i did as well, its up to you.



Thanks and Enjoy.
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Old 10-07-04, 05:11 PM   #2
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some feedback would be nice plz.
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Old 10-07-04, 07:42 PM   #3
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they was all good songs and that battle aagainst LI was funny as hell... my favorites would have to be truth and who am i.... i will edit my verse with more detaiul latertongiht when i get back this is just some quick feedback so you dont feel left out and i told you i was gunna leave some so i will edit it later tonight.... peace fam
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Old 10-08-04, 04:24 AM   #4
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wow all those views and only one persona replied?

wtf?
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Old 10-08-04, 04:52 AM   #5
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Nice shit.........Thief Anthem is pretty good. Get at ya boi so we can collab
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Old 10-08-04, 09:55 PM   #6
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Hmmm... I liked it, and had no idea you did audio. It was cool, entertaining, and just overall dope. I liked Who Am I, it was coo, and L.I. verse was funny. Basically, dope job Efusive. Keep elevatin'.
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Most of 'em hate me, and it's a rare one who loves me
Niggas fillin' up with rage but they ain't gettin' above me
And after all the battles, the wins are no longer surprising
Pushin' bar after bar, takin' over the game, revolutionizing
Never thought of takin' help from others, see, I'm too proud
And every battle raises the volume of a voice speaking aloud
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Old 10-08-04, 11:29 PM   #7
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your good....I like ya delivery but your flow is weird cuz you know how to flow your words but u flow them off beat on some tracks..like L.I. diss u rode beat right but the who am I, an nas anthem shit..ya flow was off snare...but you were flowing like u were on snare I ono maybe ya vocals were delayed or something but it was a lil off on those 2 tracks...lyrically ya solid...so I'd say your pretty good audiohead
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Old 10-09-04, 12:47 AM   #8
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i like his flow.... the who am i had a nice flow... thas how i flow sometimes.. alot of people dont hit the snares cause the snares are so confining... i let it come out how ever it comes out.. if i hit snares o well lol... if i dont .. still sounds dope tho .. i like who i am the best out of al those songs.. keep doin u .. stay up -1
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Old 10-13-04, 01:02 PM   #9
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need more feedback.
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Old 10-15-04, 04:14 PM   #10
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i really liked 'the return' dawg it was tight, beat was gud n i loved ya flow on that....gud to see more talent from the uk....

stay up dawg n get at me for a collab...

peace

oh yeh hit up my newest piece...'not collerable'
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Old 10-19-04, 10:43 AM   #11
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Coo...appriciate the feed from all those that took some time.
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