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Old 10-27-04, 04:53 PM   #1
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My First Recorded Freestyle!

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http://www.soundclick.com/util/stre...ID=1731395&q=Lo

i was really just testin shit,cuz i never used cool edit or soundclick before,so tell me how i can improve this shit ...
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Old 10-27-04, 05:04 PM   #2
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oh and shoutouts to Blown Out Productions for the beat .. much love
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Old 10-27-04, 05:05 PM   #3
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thats pretty tyte..good flow and lyrics, the quality could have been better but overall i liked it.. stay up nigga
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Old 10-27-04, 05:08 PM   #4
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my mic sucks ... i found it ... so yeh imma get a new one soon ,hopefully ..
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Old 10-27-04, 05:29 PM   #5
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weerd, nice first audio. Quality wack like I said. but you got nice flow and lyrics. Got potential nigka. SPuLMATIK sickness... weerd.
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Old 10-27-04, 05:37 PM   #6
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no doubt hoe!

SpulMATIK™ bitches ...
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Old 10-27-04, 06:23 PM   #7
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wow, nice job on this man, damn,you got some style,,lol,and good flow, yea,the production isn't great,but yo, its the delivery and ability to ride a damn beat,and you got both...great job..pc
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Old 10-27-04, 06:24 PM   #8
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thanks ma ... much love ..
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Old 10-27-04, 06:58 PM   #9
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LOL AT U FOUND UR MIC ROFL LMFAO...anywayz this was a decent peice..as i sed on aim..jus fix ur quality and u certified DOPeness
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Old 10-27-04, 07:13 PM   #10
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yeh ... thanks ...
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Old 10-27-04, 08:33 PM   #11
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Quality sucks....................lol i was exactly like that

get a betta mic also cuz i hear yo background a little

for a freestyle....shit was decent....the beat is crazy...lol i need to get on that beat...and also put yo vocals up...cuz the beat is lil louder than yo vocals..but fo the 1st shit it was pretty good. potential flow is aite......delivery.....more energy mic presence...was aite....it was str8 all around
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Old 10-30-04, 11:05 AM   #12
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blah .. imma get a better mic soon ...
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Old 10-30-04, 10:10 PM   #13
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uppin this ishh ...
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Old 10-31-04, 02:26 AM   #14
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gangsta shit nigka, keep doin' yo thang. word to yo daddies.
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Old 10-31-04, 08:35 AM   #15
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word ... thanks for the feed ..
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