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Old 10-19-04, 08:33 PM   #1
Cherry BluntZ
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IP: 431D 5206

As I take the steps I'm startin' to learn//
leavin' you like Usher the way I'll just let ya' burn//
not concerned, better yet just returned, like butter the way your insides about to churn//
I know I may not be to complex, but it's enough to beat you from all aspects//
So you're steadily fuckin' your girl in the pool with a life jacket so you can say your having safe sex//
Beat me? you'd be lucky like the day someone broke ya' bracelet//
who do you think your facin', your flow's wack, that's why they brought me in to replace it//
You think that's a line, it looks more like a sentence//
Like your girl always tells you, you're barely in this//

New ta this forum, jus introducin maself...lemme hear wht u think
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Old 10-19-04, 08:40 PM   #2
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yo welcome 2 da site work on ur flow tho barz r kinda uneven meanin they should be like this i'll use sumthin i said 1 time

"wonder why da beam iz red cuz that shit'll leave a nigga dead
pullin out da uzi an tha AK leavin dudez wit shellz in they head"

see how they r relatively tha same length it can't be like

"i run up an kill ya whole fam
i do a amazin karate move an have u twisted up like da chinese nigga jackie chan"

a little draztik wit tha xample of tha uneven 1 but yeah good luck an stay outta beef an don't freepost good luck again
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