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I dunno not really a poem or open mic
sort of both holla with some feed 1980,the year my life was blessed from Heaven pops got to steppin,pops in my head was laid to rest then its a hard lesson,it started a heart of second guessin for the rest of life stressin,not to mention the tension that came to set in from Moms,blow jobs for johns with no clothes on always gone,dope in palm singin the song of right gone wrong not understandin,had hate for God cause I know He planned it straight left me stranded,empty handed man damn I'm branded with fatal sicknesses,from cradle been known to do the sickest shit a relentless kid,murderous intensions while bent-invent the sickest spit nothin can help,thats why I stay confined inside myself done cried whats left,died and came back two times like tribe called quest its forever flowin,and constantly growin-where-ever I'm goin I've been severin and sewin,deliverin bows-endeavourin lows and comin off often hypocritical,they had the coffin locked but I slid it forth past a kid at four,I've already walked ya'lls talk come see what I did it for when I look to the sky,I wonder why my tears dont cry are they lost in lies,lost in despise of the wisemens lines from behind my eyes,minds twisted up a vision of so a called Heaven thats shady so I go to infinit,from my incision in that was givin in 1980
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IP: 3240 794D
wow,these are some intense lyrics right here, you got open on this poem and i can relate to this emotional piece immensely, great job on this man....."I've already walked y'alls talk,come see what i did it for.."...haha nice line....1
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Very good. Sensational flow and very good rhyming. Very good vocab as well. Emotion also good. Overall very good. Keep up the phenomenal work.
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