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C.hristopher S.ean D.abatos
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I. Mind vs FlOw InTeLLiGeNt
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FlOw InTeLLiGeNt has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-20-04 11:26 AM.
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I. Mind has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-20-04 06:26 PM.
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C.hristopher S.ean D.abatos
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[Somethings Wrong] As i leave practice i see my dad n could tell somethin happend... My dads face looks saddend, am i being grounded I imgained... For as long as I know him, me and him had always been jokin... I've felt good wit secrets i've told him, n even had daughter momnents... But rite now not one word was spoken, n his eyes were full of emotion.. As if his heart was swollen, n just can't take the saddness he's holdin... [Confused] As I see my house from a distant I could tell somethin was different... Is there somethin missin cuz it don't feel like home at this instant... Im tryin to imagine what happend did somethin happen so tragiclly??? Cuz i ain't understand'n why my dads in a mood to be mad at me??? When I walked in the house my dads mood change like it didn't exist... He sed he loved me n hugged me n sed bein his girl was his true wish... Still not understandin wut happend as if lies and truth fromed into fusion... My minds full of confusion, wut i just felt was it all just un-real illusions??? But its still confuse'n, as my un-abusin father tells me somethin important... im thinkin it can't get so I just listend actin like if i was his little informant... As I heard those three heart breakin words, "Baby Your Adopted"... All my memories of him bein a father, I just seemed to have lost it... The room at silence, as my tears of pain slowly slid down my face... My body was now filling up of hate while he starred and jst waits... While burstin out with tears, I shouted,"Why you tell me only now?" "So everytime u sed u loved me were lies? Now I have so much doubt.." "Who are you? I don't know you! Your nothing but a complete stranger..." "I hate U!" As he sits w/ tears, I stay quiet n keep fillin up wit hate n anger... "What do I call you now?Dad?? Hell No! Don't even do nething or Bother...” “And Don't even ever worry about me cuz dats da job of a Real Father....” [Regret] Its been a week since that event, and regret that i never forgave him.. Cuz I never had a chance to prevent, to what kind of person I made him... He turned into a man full of sorrow, a man that lost ME! His only family... N Cuz of me he won’t see tomorrow, cuz he commited suicide so tragiclly... |
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