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10-18-04, 06:17 AM
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Bangs like bikini attol
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Mad Dog™ vs Nostradamus
IP: 06B8 DBF2
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10-30 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting No D/R No Bullshit 200 Posts to Vote Topic: "Begging For Forgivness" G'Luck brutha. Minimum posts to vote: 200 Check in by: 10-21-04 at 06:17 AM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
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10-18-04, 08:54 AM
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IP: CCAE A7E8
Mad Dog™ has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-18-04 08:54 AM.
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10-18-04, 05:46 PM
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IP: 06B8 DBF2
Nostradamus has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-18-04 05:46 PM.
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10-20-04, 10:58 AM
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...Belong...
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IP: 07E0 A9F2
Topic: Begging for Forgiveness 1st: What Happened Me & Steven were born on same days we were friends from the begginin, Met all kinds of people but this girl of his...me & her had incredible feelins, One night he was out she came round and asked if Steve was around, I said no come in from the clouds dimmed the lights and played a soft sound, A sinful romance was blooming the liquor made our hearts soothin, Tryin to divert my mind but can't she put her hand in my hair and started groomin, Sex was brewing we were groovin choosin to do this without thinkin through it, Wait what was i thinkin what im about to do to Steve is worse than takin bullets, But couldn't control my emotions i hesitated but penetrated her sensations burstin, Steve walked through saw the state of affairs and i could see his soul hurtin, 2nd: The Situation Steve blew up like nuclear weapons "WHAT THE FUCK IS HAPPENING", "YO YO STEVE THIS AIN'T HOW IT LOOKS" "OH SO NOW IM IMAGINING!?!, "Aight Look it's all my fault blame me she don't deserve trouble", "For what you did Tony...*slap*...consider this friendship like a burst bubble", "U don't mean that plz lets talk we can prolly sort this out", "Right now i wanna kill you Tony so right now...there ain't much to talk about", "U sleep wit my girl behind my back and now u on ur knees beggin 4 forgiveness?" "Get up and get out of here u don't belong why u shakin like a mafia murder witness", "Look man I"..."SHUT UP...i had love for you but now it's switched to anger", "Coz now u both intruders...i no longer recognise you...you're both srangers", *I Pack up my things and go* 3rd: The Outcome 2 years have now past me and the girl are no longer together, All that guilt desperately needin forgiveness made her fly like a feather, I feel the same too i feel like i'll never recover what i truely lost, So many years of friendship traded in for a moments pleasure at what cost???, We like bros & i wouldn't expect frogiveness when i can't explain my actions, He prolly receites everyday in vivid memory like they were close captions, The pain it eats @ me forgiveness is all i seek please i beg jus end this beef, It's like mental heat it burns me deep my.life is bleak if me and u don't speak, It seems greedy of me to ask something when u know the 1st thing they taught ya, Is when u have got best friends to never betray them by bedding their daughter, The way i made it out yall prolly thought it was his girlfriend or something...that's forgivable
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10-20-04, 10:59 AM
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...Belong...
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IP: CCAE A7E8
Topic: Begging for Forgiveness 1st: What Happened Me & Steven were born on same days we were friends from the begginin, Met all kinds of people but this girl of his...me & her had incredible feelins, One night he was out she came round and asked if Steve was around, I said no come in from the clouds dimmed the lights and played a soft sound, A sinful romance was blooming the liquor made our hearts soothin, Tryin to divert my mind but can't she put her hand in my hair and started groomin, Sex was brewing we were groovin choosin to do this without thinkin through it, Wait what was i thinkin what im about to do to Steve is worse than takin bullets, But couldn't control my emotions i hesitated but penetrated her sensations burstin, Steve walked through saw the state of affairs and i could see his soul hurtin, 2nd: The Situation Steve blew up like nuclear weapons "WHAT THE FUCK IS HAPPENING", "YO YO STEVE THIS AIN'T HOW IT LOOKS" "OH SO NOW IM IMAGINING!?!, "Aight Look it's all my fault blame me she don't deserve trouble", "For what you did Tony...*slap*...consider this friendship like a burst bubble", "U don't mean that plz lets talk we can prolly sort this out", "Right now i wanna kill you Tony so right now...there ain't much to talk about", "U sleep wit my girl behind my back and now u on ur knees beggin 4 forgiveness?" "Get up and get out of here u don't belong why u shakin like a mafia murder witness", "Look man I"..."SHUT UP...i had love for you but now it's switched to anger", "Coz now u both intruders...i no longer recognise you...you're both srangers", *I Pack up my things and go* 3rd: The Outcome 2 years have now past me and the girl are no longer together, All that guilt desperately needin forgiveness made her fly like a feather, I feel the same too i feel like i'll never recover what i truely lost, So many years of friendship traded in for a moments pleasure at what cost???, We like bros & i wouldn't expect frogiveness when i can't explain my actions, He prolly receites everyday in vivid memory like they were close captions, The pain it eats @ me forgiveness is all i seek please i beg jus end this beef, It's like mental heat it burns me deep my.life is bleak if me and u don't speak, It seems greedy of me to ask something when u know the 1st thing they taught ya, Is when u have got best friends to never betray them by bedding their daughter, The way i made it out yall prolly thought it was his girlfriend or something...that's forgivable. |
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10-20-04, 11:58 AM
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Bangs like bikini attol
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IP: 06B8 DBF2
Topic: “Begging for Forgiveness” Stark depression, dealing with feelings and many questions.. My life sparks confessions, I’m never learning lessons.. Losing my 8th job, I coughed as they fired me on the spot.. Reason being, I forgot, to leave the safe draw locked.. Off the top, my boss never really liked me I could tell.. And my home life, my wife, always put my mind through hell.. Am I one of those people? That cant ever see success? Got a mind block, with stress, but too much pride to confess.. Constantly wanting to run away, but no place to escape to.. Its how it feels, when you lose hope & your own mind hates you.. Personality problems raped my conscience and sensibility.. Now I’m deranged, partly insane, forgetting responsibility.. I’m 23, see my dreams and ideals are slowly slipping.. & I’m cold, like the handle of the steel revolver I’m gripping.. I’m tripping.. My wife’s screaming, the words are but a blur.. I fucking swerve, pull the trigger, a single gunshot is heard.. Death incurred, with a flash, my life flickered inside my eyes.. Or was it the light glare on the barrel, emphasizing hells fires.. I couldn’t tell, I swung around to see my baby girl at the door.. The scene was me, placing a bullet in my brain layingon the floor.. A cold flash, enthralls my conscience, trapped in an abyss.. The living world seems so distant, but nothings sorely missed.. I see a double edged sword, my name appearing on a list.. Like broken piano chords, I’m off tune drifting in the mist.. A scene similar to Revelations, like a biblical status quo.. Demons and creatures surround me, wishing I was alone.. This place is hell, I feel helpless as I fall asleep and cry.. No thoughts of suicide, in my real life I already died.. The pains horrific, Staring up, I see a face smiling sadistically.. My tormentor, I prey, but who in their right mind would forgive me.. |
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10-20-04, 12:01 PM
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IP: 07E0 A9F2
rite lets get these votes in now uppin this thread
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10-20-04, 05:53 PM
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Bangs like bikini attol
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IP: 06B8 DBF2
Uppin this shit...................................
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10-20-04, 08:55 PM
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Umm...Yeah
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This was feedback posted for Nostradamus
IP: 5043 32F4
damn honestly...if i voted it wouldn't make sense at all....
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10-20-04, 10:25 PM
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Bangs like bikini attol
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IP: 8FB6 AEBF
Why do you always post in my battles but never vote or leave feedback?
Uppin anyway.... |
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10-21-04, 03:51 AM
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IP: 07E0 A9F2
wtf!?!...normally there's 3 votes by now...uppin..
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10-21-04, 04:43 AM
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IP: 06B8 DBF2
Vote or die.......................................
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10-21-04, 06:34 AM
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IP: 4ED6 D0C7
Voted For: Nostradamus
aight wheh!!!!! those were long lol......anayways.....mad dogg urs had a gud story but i really didnt think it flowed but the vocabulary was there i liked the part of the situation but again it was just like reading from a story no flow....if u would of had it flow i think u wuld of had got it because both u had gud emotions and everything was there but i like nostros better gud work to both of u |
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10-21-04, 08:28 PM
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Bangs like bikini attol
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IP: 8FB6 AEBF
Uppin again.......................................
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10-22-04, 04:07 AM
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IP: 06B8 DBF2
Cmon whores.. Start voting or I will kill some babies..
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