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10- Lines
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No Recycling
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MY B DA OTHER BATTLE WAS SET ON 15 MINUTES TO POST YA VERSE SORRY

G-LUCK

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-28-04 at 10:32 PM

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Two_Bit has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-28-04 10:04 PM.

DrasticMeasureZ has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-28-04 10:07 PM.

when i pop or fight, i come hot wit flight, n like writers block i'ma knock ya lightz/
hear us vetz, u'll stop u'll like, the talk of mights, cuz even if u tried~to~stone, D, mi~cro~phone, u couldn't rock the mike/

my spits please the brutes, when ya voice is more high than be's on flutes/
i throw free's at dudes, n since i like my juice fresh i'ma squeeze this fruit/
i'm above the law i'll fight a cop, cuz they know the fact that wat i write is hot/
i admit i don't write a lot, but this fag puts headings on he's spits so he can call it a title shot/
i'll wreck this, cuz my spits diss em cee's relentless n hab em beheaded/
in this battle u'll come second, cuz i wreck it, so don't b ashamed when no one listens to u n doesn't "check it"/

i stack undifined bodies in piles, like x files, cuz didn't u kno abc'z are crazy n that D's wild/
my spits makes ya girl smile, cuz she knows i wrecked u in a 10 min free style/

AIGHT IAM DONE~! WORD

hey homie can we up this ta 10-12 lines? it'd be tight man.. accept?

here we go aiight lord jesus we bless
the numba of bullets i burst ta ya chest
you a crackhead, so what if i made a mess
the reason ya called drastic measures
is cos you need cocaine to get ya pleasures
a crackhead win shit? never ever ever
and son - you need ta take drastik measurez
if you ever gon take on this a guy dis clever
i shot ya, ya body crash down like the towers on 9/11
ya fam sittin weepin listinen to tha reverend

gl hf

if you ever gon take on this a guy dis clever

fuck, thats supposed to be "if you eva gon take on a guy dis clever"

xcuse the mistake fam :\

Voted For: DrasticMeasureZ

Drastic-dont use the /'s...its noobish, Anyways...instead of having a lot of little multis...try to expand...but its good that your using them, nice punches at times, a few week ones though...your structure was off and that messed wit your flow, but an overall decent drop

Two-Your structure and flow was better than Drastic, but thats about it....tried to play his name twice, weak...gun talk is over played, and no punches....you need to elevate son

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Aight Thanx For Da Vote And I'll Put Dat Favor In Check Homie Word Uppin For Votes

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Voted For: DrasticMeasureZ

Two_Bit:
k your stucture was good and it flowed but it didnt have any punches didnt work good dawg you need some punches to win...so try and but you ahd some pretty witty metas that was koo...try working on punches ask someone to elevate you or soemthing...

DrasticMeasurez:
nice verse to steched tho but it flowed i guess bad stucture but alright i guess...dope punches hit hard damn...jk...good vocabulary and some pretty hard hitting witty metaphores...but try working on stucture it will make you flow better...

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aight word uppin dis battle needs vote plz close this.....................word

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aight come on peep'z uppin for votes holla peep'z sleeping on it uppin for votes holla........word

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