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Old 10-25-04, 10:57 PM   #1
Zack T
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You've Changed

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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=157051 - I replied to that.

I'm working on a song here, called You've Changed. The first verse is entirely mine, the chorus is too. 2nd verse will be my friend Cobb, then the 3rd is going to be back and forth.

His verse and the back and forth stuff ain't written yet, but I've done and recorded my verse and the chorus, but read the lyrics here.

(Zack T, Intro, speaking)
Everything, in this life changes!
It might be your job, it might be your house,
it might be your friends. It all changes.

(Zack T)
So you have a friend, will he be there in the end?
Is he the type of man who'll come back with you again?
Remember that time in the day, way back when?
Back then people would play, boys tryin to be men
Those bums on the street, they we're all crack heads
So me and Cobb would deal it to em, right until the end
But then we got busted, the cops did apprehend
And now Cobb is pointing at me, sayin "It was him!"
Dim is my light bulb, my cell is dank and dirty
I've landed in the big top and stayin' till I'm thirty
Hurting, I hate this place. I can't believe he did this
I'm grippin on the cell bars with my clenched fists
We used to hang out together till you brought me this pain
You turned your hating back on me, understand what I'm sayin?
You closed the book on us and ripped out all the pages
And now I'll hunt you down because of these changes

(Chorus, Zack T)
People in this life, everybody is jaded
They all fool around because their life is deflated
Hated by everyone that their life contained
They mean nothing to em, their head is re-arranged
Waiting for them to stop is like waiting for death
It doesn't happen suddenly, it slowly onsets
The best of my efforts don't explain the strange
Like you, you're different, and it's because you've changed
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Old 10-26-04, 05:35 AM   #2
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aye, aight, its lookin pretty tight so far
maybe work on makin ya point across in a few lines on the verse a lil better
cause some shit seemed forced
but its lookin good

lookin forward to the full version of it
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