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Old 10-25-04, 12:35 AM   #1
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ajax vs Auspicious

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10 lines blind spit..Due Monday at 4pm.
no crew votes!
Check in and G'luck

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 09-19-06 at 11:14 AM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.
 
Old 10-25-04, 12:36 AM   #2
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ajax has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-25-04 12:36 AM.
 
Old 10-25-04, 02:43 AM   #3
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Auspicious…

Your shit couldn’t have soul if you were saying sun in Spanish…
I got hunger for greatness too, but damn son ya famished…
I know you got potential, you just can’t reach it…
Like a car with a governor, your never gonna be shit…
Shits a riddle, and Aus aint good at problem solving…
He loses to people not even at their peak, but still ‘EVOLE’-ing…
Before I started writing he was wishing me luck…
Look how quick he is to just give himself up…
Socrates might jump on his dick and say I have no chance…
But Socrates has to get up, so these two queers can slow dance…

For the Evolve line, he lost to someone named evolve, pretty simple…
 
Old 10-25-04, 02:48 AM   #4
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Old 10-25-04, 02:52 AM   #5
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My verse will be here tomarrow....
 
Old 10-25-04, 02:55 AM   #6
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Ughh... Hurry...
 
Old 10-25-04, 03:53 PM   #7
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This kid needs to elevate, fuck miracle growth..
Cuz the only time ajax wiped me off.. was the bacterial soap..
Hes garbage.. hop off my style you dont seem fit..
Cuz i could bite, recyle, n' reuse his lines
..n' come off doper than he did..
Your screwed, you dont know what kinda trouble your soakin in..
Cuz' i'd tell him elevation is key, but he lost the door to open it..
I could say he was a challenge.. but thats too wrong to mention..
Cuz hes on the road to success.. in the wrong direction!
Im ruthless, i'll leave ya hand sting and back ripped..
Cuz if I flipped his lines to make em dope..
..........................He'd be doin handsprings and backflips !

e-beef like whoa
 
Old 10-25-04, 06:40 PM   #8
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This was feedback posted for ajax

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Completely terrible, no offense.

The first bar, you had the setup second for some reason. The wordplay is simple, and not worded well.

Then the rest of your verese is terrible... some generic evolve line (used ALL THE FUCKING TIME AT RB, trust me), then that useless give himself up line... you can't do personals like that man, you gotta word it better. that closer was blah.
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Old 10-25-04, 06:43 PM   #9
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This kid needs to elevate, fuck miracle growth..
Cuz the only time ajax wiped me off.. was the bacterial soap..
decent nameplay
Hes garbage.. hop off my style you dont seem fit..
Cuz i could bite, recyle, n' reuse his lines
..n' come off doper than he did..
played
Your screwed, you dont know what kinda trouble your soakin in..
Cuz' i'd tell him elevation is key, but he lost the door to open it..
blah
I could say he was a challenge.. but thats too wrong to mention..
Cuz hes on the road to success.. in the wrong direction!
blah
Im ruthless, i'll leave ya hand sting and back ripped..
Cuz if I flipped his lines to make em dope..
..........................He'd be doin handsprings and backflips !
played to hell

first line won this, everything else was ass. but, better worded ass.

ajax, you should pick up some tips.
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Old 10-25-04, 07:23 PM   #10
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im up 1-0 uppin
 
Old 10-25-04, 07:30 PM   #11
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If he votes.......................................
 
Old 10-25-04, 10:33 PM   #12
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I could say he was a challenge.. but thats too wrong to mention..
Cuz hes on the road to success.. in the wrong direction!

^^recycled or bit
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Old 10-25-04, 11:16 PM   #13
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Just a played concept........Why in the fuck do people not vote on this board?

Uppin...if you leave a link it will be hit up with honesty..thank you.
 
Old 10-26-04, 02:02 AM   #14
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Originally Posted by Auspicious
Just a played concept........Why in the fuck do people not vote on this board?

Uppin...if you leave a link it will be hit up with honesty..thank you.

He has me blacklisted so I couldnt vote but thats just me, gotta ask the rest of the people bout them.
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Old 10-26-04, 02:02 AM   #15
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Originally Posted by Auspicious
Just a played concept........Why in the fuck do people not vote on this board?

Uppin...if you leave a link it will be hit up with honesty..thank you.

He has me blacklisted so I couldnt vote but thats just me, gotta ask the rest of the people bout them.
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