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10-21-04, 10:47 PM
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New to RV
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Topic:Institutionalized
IP: 17A7 11E5
Insanity Day after day I spend, staring longingly out of the barred window 10 years I have been in this trend, with no sanity yet to show I am a prisoner, stuck forever... both in my shattered mind and space Constantly I get night terrors, visitors then go away picturing a nut case What ever can one do, I was born with the destiny of a 'funner' room I get watched even when I poo, then shoved back into my rubber tomb No time or place for me to repent, I just get meds so I can have a 'chance' Life has become eternal torment, life is passing me by without a glance All I want to do is go out and enjoy life, unfortunately that is impossible Why oh why had I not just put down the knife, suicide just seemed acceptable But that time has past, I am ready and willing to just experience things My life simply will not last, I have gotten the telltale dream of falling I get the recommendation of just stopping it, what to do, what to do If I do, I will be a colossal hypocrite, oh well, I never really was a good Jew My time is short, my will is weak, I have to do what is right and end it now My life has reached its final peak, goodbye fare world, farewell, chao
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rap4 ( P ) Pronunciation Key (rp) n. Slang: A form of popular <a href="http://www.ntsearch.com/search.php?q=music&v=56">music</a> developed especially in African-American urban communities and characterized by spoken or chanted rhyming lyrics with a syncopated, repetitive rhythmic accompaniment. ^Don't forget the white man^ Poetic Scriptures poems: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=157364 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=157462 |
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10-22-04, 05:44 AM
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Light Weight
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IP: C286 773C
diz wuz iight, but the one flaw wuz.......
i got so into it, i wanted there too be more.. |
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10-25-04, 02:49 PM
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New to RV
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IP: A713 E6BC
Uppin the thread
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rap4 ( P ) Pronunciation Key (rp) n. Slang: A form of popular <a href="http://www.ntsearch.com/search.php?q=music&v=56">music</a> developed especially in African-American urban communities and characterized by spoken or chanted rhyming lyrics with a syncopated, repetitive rhythmic accompaniment. ^Don't forget the white man^ Poetic Scriptures poems: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=157364 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=157462 |
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10-26-04, 11:22 PM
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New to RV
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IP: 17A7 11E5
Uppin' the thread
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rap4 ( P ) Pronunciation Key (rp) n. Slang: A form of popular <a href="http://www.ntsearch.com/search.php?q=music&v=56">music</a> developed especially in African-American urban communities and characterized by spoken or chanted rhyming lyrics with a syncopated, repetitive rhythmic accompaniment. ^Don't forget the white man^ Poetic Scriptures poems: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=157364 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=157462 |
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10-27-04, 02:59 PM
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New to RV
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IP: A713 E6BC
Uppin'... come on people.
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rap4 ( P ) Pronunciation Key (rp) n. Slang: A form of popular <a href="http://www.ntsearch.com/search.php?q=music&v=56">music</a> developed especially in African-American urban communities and characterized by spoken or chanted rhyming lyrics with a syncopated, repetitive rhythmic accompaniment. ^Don't forget the white man^ Poetic Scriptures poems: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=157364 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=157462 |
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10-28-04, 01:39 AM
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New to RV
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IP: 17A7 11E5
Jeez, only one feedback. Take a few minutes people. Upping... again
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rap4 ( P ) Pronunciation Key (rp) n. Slang: A form of popular <a href="http://www.ntsearch.com/search.php?q=music&v=56">music</a> developed especially in African-American urban communities and characterized by spoken or chanted rhyming lyrics with a syncopated, repetitive rhythmic accompaniment. ^Don't forget the white man^ Poetic Scriptures poems: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=157364 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=157462 |
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10-28-04, 03:50 AM
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Middle Weight
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IP: 005F B7E2
life is ice cold like price control// seem to fluctuate while i duck hate//need pure keen opportunity like a European community// my verbal sickness too astounding to tell doctors its tragic like downing helicopters// in the hood nervous don't get good service//
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10-28-04, 07:33 AM
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#8
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New Jack
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IP: C837 AA17
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post spits in your own thread dumbass...  it was aight 6.5/10 but to be honest that font sux, its straight shit for a nice read other then that i thought it was good |
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