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Mike Hawk has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-29-04 03:26 PM.

Triple_N has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-29-04 03:30 PM.

You takin pride in ya hood? It's a fucking shame B
Cuz the (Queens)Bridge been over since the fuckin' 80's
You been wack lately, so you i guess haven't changed dawg
Them new lines you got, got applauded....................
..................by an audience of dinosaurs.
You aint got no game, I do though, infact. . .. .
can someone tell me why he was gettin play. . .. . .
.............after I left the chat.
Deal with it, ya wack. . .go dont wanna test the god
We know Triple scared to raise the metal, like fightin Zeus wit a lightning rod
Mike’ll smack this bastard, No need to straighten up, your an exposed faggot
We're not supposed to use double 'N'egatives, yet you Triple your wack status
I’d spit an audio verse. . .and you’d probably recite it.
Then I’d bust that ass. . .but you’d probably like it!
Nah man, you not wack……………………… you even less son
And you already know the deal……………………………….
…………….Youll never get one!
Stupid fag, your verses is all a drag. . . . . . .. . . . .
And when Queens niggas say ‘Dun’ they describing every battle you’ve had!

Damn, that structure is fucked up. . . . .. .

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Your a fake thug be real...there's no chance in hell of u gettin a deal
Thats why he claps for his own posts in avatar cuz no one else will
Ya chances of bein' respected are dead & ya elevation's in rigermortis
Ya verse's like admin's transferin' chancellors..u'll find a way to "bored-us"
Ya team called "brain matter" got weak "batters" cuz its poorly funded
U boast their elite but stats don't lie...ya rec suggets their below .500
Your constantly sayin' the name Tha Q even more than he himself do
So if he stays on the tip of your tongue what does that say about you?
You've got a better homo radar than any faggot alive on any given day
Cuz construction of ya being's like ya famous LL sayin.."every thread is gay"
Combine his accounts & strobes deduction & it proves he don't get out much
Dats why his dick & hand exchanged numbers cuz they like to stay in touch
.....Mike Hawk's a scientific marvel that can amass any man great wealth
Cuz he's the world's 1st A sexual human...in every battle he fucks himself
He views RV the way immigrants view the U.S......like its paved with gold
Its his lil slice of heaven cuz this is only place on earth his dick gets rode

Voted For: Triple_N

Mike:
Ya had some daaamn nice punches in there.. word to some of the wordplay.. nice opener n closer... but i wasnt feelin that structure... hard to read and pick up the flow.. a couple of lines seemed a little stretched... and some punches werent hittin as hard as the other ones..
. but it was a pretty nice verse... good work..
id give it like............. 7.5/10

Triple:
maddd punches... I was feelin ya wordplay, metas and personals... came really nice... hittin hard.... flow was good.. structure was pretty neat.. ..... word...
id give yours like..... uhh.. 8/10



good battle.

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Voted For: Triple_N

NNN hands down......overall better verse......mike hawk when i got to that dinosaour line i knew it was over lol no hate though it was a safe verse.....and ur verse dind flow....only on some parts like i sed other then that safe verse.....
NNN u had an overall better verse nice flow and gud vocab so im gonna vote for NNN....nice battle peeps

Voted For: Mike Hawk

got dayum My mayn Mike got this on lock WHOAAA STRAIGHT FIYA NIGGA

mike: these lines were fuckin SYck i liked this verse alot...lemme show you some lines i was feelin

I’d spit an audio verse. . .and you’d probably recite it.
Then I’d bust that ass. . .but you’d probably like it!

You takin pride in ya hood? It's a fucking shame B
Cuz the (Queens)Bridge been over since the fuckin' 80's

Mike’ll smack this bastard, No need to straighten up, your an exposed faggot
We're not supposed to use double 'N'egatives, yet you Triple your wack status

Stupid fag, your verses is all a drag. . . . . . .. . . . .
And when Queens niggas say ‘Dun’ they describing every battle you’ve had! (this was fuckin DOPE!!!!!)

mayn that shit is fuckin crazy...ur punches hit him like a ma fucka....ur structure i was feelin that fo sho too....real nyce shit...........i think imma battle u in da crew battle too ...anywayz this shit was on Fiya........ur personals was killa....even had dope vocab...and wordplay this whole shit was nyce...Damn

Triple: Ur shit was dope too but he came harder with the punches..and your shit was madd stretched..but they alwayz have..u gotta give that up LOL......ur punches was syck....flow was blah...vocab was crazy.....this also was a dope verse..heres some lines i liked from u


Ya chances of bein' respected are dead & ya elevation's in rigermortis
Ya verse's like admin's transferin' chancellors..u'll find a way to "bored-us"

Combine his accounts & strobes deduction & it proves he don't get out much
Dats why his dick & hand exchanged numbers cuz they like to stay in touch


but styll mike killed this

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Voted For: Triple_N

yo... lmao... this is how it goes down...

mike hawk:

You takin pride in ya hood? It's a fucking shame B
Cuz the (Queens)Bridge been over since the fuckin' 80's

*pretty weak opener... we shouldn't have to stretch 80's into "a-d's just to make it flow with the line above it

You been wack lately, so you i guess haven't changed dawg
Them new lines you got, got applauded....................
..................by an audience of dinosaurs.

*ooooohhhh...bad business here... like dinosaurs?... c'mon dawg you can hit better than that

You aint got no game, I do though, infact. . .. .
can someone tell me why he was gettin play. . .. . .
.............after I left the chat.

*maybe a shot at a personal here but everyone don't know what that situation is and most of us do go to RV chat like that... coulda been better

Deal with it, ya wack. . .go dont wanna test the god
We know Triple scared to raise the metal, like fightin Zeus wit a lightning rod

*best line so far... different... not great but a decent line

Mike’ll smack this bastard, No need to straighten up, your an exposed faggot
We're not supposed to use double 'N'egatives, yet you Triple your wack status

*ok i guess... still not hitting really hard, though

I’d spit an audio verse. . .and you’d probably recite it.
Then I’d bust that ass. . .but you’d probably like it

*booooooo... worst line in ya verse... ya flow shortened up and ya used some pretty basic lines here... beginner type shyt

Nah man, you not wack……………………… you even less son
And you already know the deal……………………………….
…………….Youll never get one!

*second worst line in the verse... still basic....same as the last bar as far as the critique

Stupid fag, your verses is all a drag. . . . . . .. . . . .
And when Queens niggas say ‘Dun’ they describing every battle you’ve had!

* ok closer that shoulda been worded better to hit harder... man... it seems like ya really wanted to get at him but it just wasn't working out for you this time... every time i thought you was gonna come with the cannons ya pulled out ya pop gun with the little flag that comes out. not a bad battle... just not really good...


Triple_N

Your a fake thug be real...there's no chance in hell of u gettin a deal
Thats why he claps for his own posts in avatar cuz no one else will

*now that's how ya do an opener...lmao... set-up was kinda iffy but ya finished that bar strong...lol

Ya chances of bein' respected are dead & ya elevation's in rigermortis
Ya verse's like admin's transferin' chancellors..u'll find a way to "bored-us"

*ok line... seemed kinda forced at the end but i got it

Ya team called "brain matter" got weak "batters" cuz its poorly funded
U boast their elite but stats don't lie...ya rec suggets their below .500

*nice personal... strong blow... that one had to hurt...lol ... "stats don't lie" <---- truth!

Your constantly sayin' the name Tha Q even more than he himself do
So if he stays on the tip of your tongue what does that say about you?

*hmmm... another shot at a personal... not as effective as the last one but a decent shot still

You've got a better homo radar than any faggot alive on any given day
Cuz construction of ya being's like ya famous LL sayin.."every thread is gay"

*not actually a personal but it's pretty funny...lol...decent punch here

Combine his accounts & strobes deduction & it proves he don't get out much
Dats why his dick & hand exchanged numbers cuz they like to stay in touch

lmao again... he keeps 'em coming... ouch... that was as good as this line i used in my battle... (had homie heated with that one)... but that's another story

.....Mike Hawk's a scientific marvel that can amass any man great wealth
Cuz he's the world's 1st A sexual human...in every battle he fucks himself

lol...funny... don't really like gay jokes but is it gay if ya fuck yaself? then that would make masturbation...nevamind...lol

He views RV the way immigrants view the U.S......like its paved with gold
Its his lil slice of heaven cuz this is only place on earth his dick gets rode

*good ass closer... a little personal... nice punch structure was good... pretty easy battle to decide... trip had better punches and personals a coupla set-ups fell short but the finishers came through in the clutch

v/ Triple_N

Voted For: Triple_N

I think that Triple_N got this battle because i feel that Triple_N came stronger in the following categories...Punches i felt Triple_N got it they were used effectifely and were on point Mike u shoulda been a bit more creative on this occasion personals i felt went to Triple_N good lookin wordplay and creativity goes to Triple_N and flow and structure i'll give to Triple_N.

V/Triple_N There's my sig be sure to return the favour honestly

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