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10-29-04, 03:11 PM
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Judging
IP: A713 E6BC
Judging
Note: I changed the spelling to "peeple", "freee", "tiime", and "seerch" so the auto-seerch would not appear.Peeple all over the world, and in this very site, perform damning acts of sin Judging is causing the world to spin , it affects everyone, even your own kin Stereotypical views are the norm, and tear up relationships before they form Peeple fear these emotional storms, so they get scared to get up and perform Talent goes wasted because no one cares, reputation is what matters People's esteems go to tatters, and the well-known's reps get fatter This epidemic is even affecting this thread, and the poem gets quickly dead Poems should never go unread, but it happens and familiars' get read instead No one takes tiime to have a little respect, get excluded from the sect Blows like this go for the neck, all of the disrespect converge and intersect To form the knife that goes in a fist, then next slicing through a tender wrist These poor peeple never been kissed, emotion never brought out to be pissed So what is one to ever do, just leave these emotions alone to brew This is not something new,these longforming weapons will make a violent stew This happens in every known city, speak to peeple and set the emotions freee Quell this forming danger immediately, this is not a disaster none could forsee
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rap4 ( P ) Pronunciation Key (rp) n. Slang: A form of popular <a href="http://www.ntsearch.com/search.php?q=music&v=56">music</a> developed especially in African-American urban communities and characterized by spoken or chanted rhyming lyrics with a syncopated, repetitive rhythmic accompaniment. ^Don't forget the white man^ Poetic Scriptures poems: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=157364 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=157462 Last edited by Grammar Popo : 10-30-04 at 12:08 AM. Reason: Finish and stop auto-seerch |
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10-29-04, 03:15 PM
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<<-Carpe Noctum->>
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IP: 0825 899A
wow, i feel you on this subject, great points you bought up in this piece, keep droppin these great poems that make us think, nice job...1
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10-30-04, 12:11 AM
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IP: 17A7 11E5
Thank you for the feedback. I put a closer, font, and title on it. I also stopped the annoying auto-seerch.
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rap4 ( P ) Pronunciation Key (rp) n. Slang: A form of popular <a href="http://www.ntsearch.com/search.php?q=music&v=56">music</a> developed especially in African-American urban communities and characterized by spoken or chanted rhyming lyrics with a syncopated, repetitive rhythmic accompaniment. ^Don't forget the white man^ Poetic Scriptures poems: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=157364 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=157462 |
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10-30-04, 01:51 AM
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Puttin MD On The Map
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IP: 408D D2A2
nice drop man felt it alll threwout was a lot of good points..i liked the yopic too...good verse vocab and flowed good keep it up man
peace~1
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