watch me ''ripp'' a text like a wet paper bag
my flows bring mood swing like i got niggas on the ''rag'' *1*
fuckin fagg, trynna ride my ding a ling
fuck bling bling, i'll grace yall with a ''golden shower'' *2*
cause most these rv kats are softer then flowers
like highlander there can be only one *3*
an i ''open'' up niggas emoptions like a cd rom..
cause where i'm from, we strictly hood *4*
always up to no good
u'd be like me if u could, but thats damn near a mission impossible.. *5*
i aint tom cruise but consider me the ''top gun''
cuase i pop at the mouth n pop a glock an you pop nun (nothin) *6*
catchin me is like big pun on the run
i'll run you off the track n snap ya ankles, son *7*
my ''soul'' does all the walkin n my rhymes do all the talkin
I got my ''Eyez Watchin'' the streets like i'm stalkin..*8*
so before u step to me think twice
cuase bein ''dope, man'' is my occupatin an ''rap name'' like obie trice *9*
i'll stick ya head in a vice like casino
i'ma ''good fella'' but dont call me joe pesci or de niro *10*
I'm part of the ''angelz'' but influenced by devil..
bout to change our name to 'D.O.A' just to show u aint on our level..*11*
i'ma sick nigga, with mental thoughts..
bringin lyrical onslaught...*12*
smakin the judge when he sentences me in the court
life they gave me, an for what? killin a few people...*13*
i had to get the point across like a churches steeple....
ya rhymes febel, an mines top notch...*14*
niggas stayin hittin ''rocks'' like they orderd a shot of scotch..
i provide the fiends with dope lines *15*
hence the name, an hence the reazon i'm all over the place like the new york times..*16*
who needs rhymes when ya street wise
cause in my ''jeans'' money is ''herridatary'' like ''levis''...*17*
dont blame me, blame my parents, i was born this fly...
ever since a ''lil g'' people could see, the talent in my eyes...*18*
i was raized with dollar signs as my first love....
but i guess, i just fit to rhymin like a glove....*19*
sent from the heaves above cause god couldnt be everywhere..
i aint the olsen twins, theres only ''one of a kind'' an findin somebody like me is highly rare...*20*
i dont know if yall aware...
but like kanye west i stack my money to the sky n scream ''we dont care''!!!!
*21*!

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uppin for some feed yall.........

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not bad, this is a nice freestyle.. best lines would prolly be the portion that says..

who needs rhymes when ya street wise
cause in my ''jeans'' money is ''herridatary'' like ''levis''
^u had nice wordplay throughout and metas, good job and hit up my open mic, aight, pz- nigga..

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mmhmmm, appreciated...
i'll drop feed on yo' shits right now

uppin yall

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Not the best shit i've seen from you but that was still decent bro

uppin for some feed yall......

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nice work tho' i liked the other freestyle betta'.keep em comin' n get@me

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I'm like CHUCKy dyin' to live in the flesh free of the BATTERY,
ASSAULT n ROBBERY rapidly,wishin' cupid would clap at me
N lift this evil spell so I can experience happilly evil backwards-see(down there)
EVIL............backwards =............LIVE