used in battle wiv oreo but might aswell get feed to...literally 10 min drop...

Gone Like The Wind

How quick it all passes the good times of youth…
Like waiting for that fairy to collect your tooth…
To tell the truth im not sure I made the most of it…
Looking for perfect times unaware I was so close 2 it…
just gone like wind, carrying you like winter leaves…
Trying to be your idol, punching like keanu reeves…
Missin school but at the time like manic depression…
Yet leaving made u panic cos of fear of progression…
Scared of the future and so desperate for the past…
Broken leg on purpose so kids wud sign the cast…
Just wanted it to last but its all gone in a flash…
Selling unwanted gifts on the front for extra cash…
Invest in a cabinet to store prestigious medals in…
Excruciating pain but refuse to take the medicine…
Medalling with friends results in first detention…
Much tension on muscles to grab the girls attention…
Eyes re-open from closure to nothing but memories…
Feels like life not over but been going for centuries…
Gone like the wind in full agreement with the phrase…
Tear dissolves through skin after the content on this page…


Feedback plz y'all



i'll return it...pz

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hahaha thats a dope topical i might just lose, damn this is my first but alright

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SIGNED RAPPER YOU LOOKIN AT

uppin

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yeah that shit was coo.......nice topical......

good struc and everything.......

that woz really impressive, good flow and structure.

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Good flow & structure; A few iller lines & that woulda been the dopest shit i've seen today. Aight got saome things to work on myself just helpin you out bro! that was tight 8/10

word it was only some quik shit so im pleased wiv the feed............

keep it comin........

pz

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Put down a harmony sound like a bugle on an army compound
Fake butts I wake up with revili married a girl name Beverly crown
Some cats hate but never me clowns try be impressive with action
Like an aggressive faction take territories make horror stories attraction
To guns and violence but no funds will silence most groups
Ear my dew rag rude but it brings magnitude and toast troops
Must have wine before I thrust a rhyme plus my nine

that was good.keep em comin'

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I'm like CHUCKy dyin' to live in the flesh free of the BATTERY,
ASSAULT n ROBBERY rapidly,wishin' cupid would clap at me
N lift this evil spell so I can experience happilly evil backwards-see(down there)
EVIL............backwards =............LIVE