Battle Rules:

6 - 8 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-26-04 at 06:37 AM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

*murkage* has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-23-04 06:38 AM.

---yo-blackwell - how the hell did you find rap verse
---wot makes you think you could battle me wivout gettin capped 1st

---keep chattin shit ill make your lip burst - hip dispursed - leave you layin in a hurse
---ill leave u lyricaly dryed up - tied up - dieing of thirst

---one verse - is all it takes to demolish this noob
---1 week from now - your chick will b polishin my meat tube

so next time dont get into situations you cant get out of with a headder
coz picking a number like me can cause comlications - ill slice you up like cheddar

(blackwell is a make of cheese over hear in london)

uuuupppppiiiiiinnn for votes ppl
come on as soon as this lil clump of nob cheese or should i say noob cheese (lol) posts his verse ima print it out on paper and wipe my ass with it looool
cmon ppl upin for votes safe!

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blackwell has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-26-04 06:34 AM.

Acids Inside Of Your Skin Cells”¦ And ¦“Cease-The-Reproductions”¦.....Winning The Battle? Nope, Your Scarred-In-By-Great-Malfunctions Cuz The Only Time Your ¦“Having The Edge At Your Finger Tips”¦ Is ¦“Holding-A-Pepsi-With-Carbohydrate-Reductions”¦.....
.....Concepts? Your Plumbing-Few So I’ll Smash ¦“Fruits Trucks Inside Of Your Mind”¦ To Cause A ¦“Traffic Jam”¦ To Prove There’s No ¦“Creativity-Coming-Through”¦.....I’m Ruining Your Reputation With Punches, You Get Mauled-By-Two, And I’ll ¦“Snatch The Last Seconds Of Your Freedom”¦ And ¦“Boast In Your Face”¦ Like I ¦“Shot-A-Squash-Ball-At-You”¦.....

uppin............................................. .........................................

Voted For: blackwell

flow and struct: BW gets this cuz his was better put together and flowed a lil easier
multis: BW had more and they were more complexed
Punches: BW had more of them
enjoymen: BW verse did it for me
personals: none at all

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im the elite of this rappin spot i dont need no more bars to make you see more stars than astronauts/

up on this cmon man they need ta be closed....................................

thx for tha vote man..appreciate it.......ill hit ya back

Voted For: blackwell

Okay this go's to Blacwell....He had Harder Punche's Gd Personal's -a knida confusing Structure But murkage cam weak and some of his line's did'nt really make sense..
Punches/B
Structure/Tie
Wit/B
Personals/B
Overall Blackwell got this.No Hate Return The Fav..In this battle
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uppin i need one more on this bitch n its a ko.........................................

Voted For: blackwell

Easy win for blackwell-Need i say More?
Murkage Fuck off u are wack
Nice verse black even though it was bitten from another site Good one

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Voted For: blackwell

blackwell's verse was more complex and he had better punches...vocab was better, metas were better.....he just need to set up his punches better, yo structure was kew..i've seen it b4....you got tha jist, yo... keep doin it...

murkage's verse was elementary...nothing stood out...you gotta be more complex, cuz nowadays, heads is gettin creative.....but, you definately got potential...just battle iLL heads or read their battle...but, blackwell murked you

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