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Old 11-02-04, 02:31 PM   #1
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My Hustle(unfinished)

IP: 8F1B 440C

lyrics by: sixpionts..(artik phrost)
*im not finished with this...i started this when i was listenin to that "never let me down" kanye west cut..

it flows betta on audio, but i dont got tha proper tools for dat, so tell me what ya'll think....

Music
I get down in the morning to the beat of these streets
Even tho my body is yawning, rhymes got the E in my feet
And, can you belive all the bench players that wanna-be on my team?
Man, I've seen some shit that don't even exsist in dreams
Different scenerios, been bounced around in like ball in the offense
I've been off since, in nonsense, where I stand up, and thats taken to affense
I'm just looking for a brighter day, or somewhat lighter way
Cuz' I'm being chewed out, yet still carrying all this wieght
But, I put up, cuz' I got these savage tendancies
To wrestle with life's track, but never fail to pen a beat
It's the pen in me, thats got my dreams locked behind bars
So I enter this world: closed eyes and open arms
Breathing behind these lines, waiting for the gun to start
Scripting pictures, while ya'll just picture, dawg I've mastered this art
I'm blasting ya'll heart!! I been in this game for way too long
Name better than copy-right, cuz' bitches can't copy right, so my legacy lives on!!


Life
I'm down for the years I've known excellence to success
As I, put stress down into the best
Not quite finished my course, but I've put the answers to the test
Confessions lead to explainations, but theories remained a guess
I remained blessed, with knowlegde bore from molecules
Brain fragments in fractions of the proper tools
I stuck to books, yes I took in education
So I could educate shuns, to help others reach destinations
Life is my recreation, but not be taken as a game
Scrimage is the image, it's rough to the top of the chain

...to be finished soon....
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Old 11-02-04, 02:39 PM   #2
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nice work.good structure.keep em comin'.
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I'm like CHUCKy dyin' to live in the flesh free of the BATTERY,
ASSAULT n ROBBERY rapidly,wishin' cupid would clap at me
N lift this evil spell so I can experience happilly evil backwards-see(down there)
EVIL............backwards =............LIVE
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Old 11-03-04, 02:21 PM   #3
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thanx...uppin this....i wanna know if i should finish it
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Old 11-03-04, 02:36 PM   #4
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dis was a good piece...yea u should finish it...i'd like to c how it would b all done n shit...
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