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11-02-04, 11:19 AM
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^Hoodz Legend^
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No Problems
IP: 497B D710
ehhh....stole lil' scrappyz song name oh well....chorus sorta on tha same beat as lil' scrappyz but it flowz on tha beat from how we do by the game.....which iz tha song i wuz listenin 2 wen i wrote this 2 dayz ago haven't had a chance 2 post it tho anyway this my 1st open mic but here it iz...
(Chorus)
now u can get hit wit da gat bulletz goin thru ya back make ya backbone crack or u can get hit wit heata bulletz goin thru ya beat then i hop in my beema...but u on't wunt no problemz oh! but u on't wunt no problemz oh! but u on't wunt no problemz i gotta uzi thatah fuck u up at tha moviez wen this nigga done wit u u gon need sum fresh air/ cuz every nigga know i'm they worst nightmare/ ya rhymez can't compare ta mine/ any nigga tryna do me harm get they throat filled wita nine/ nigga u ain't neva commited no crimez/ for my niggaz i put my life on tha line/ if a nigga wunna stunt/ i pop my trunk/ pull out tha pump/ pull it slow an make ya body jump/ a couple shellzah leave ya body slumped/ cuz tha trigga got pulled an 2 clipz got dumped/ unda my shirt u gon find sumthin bullet proof/ if niggaz run up on me i blow da roof off they coupe/ but i don't make a mistake cuz i ride in a bullet proof coupe/ if u thinkin i'ma punk/ u gon find yaself fucked up/ u an ya crew might leave here wit they headz plus a lump now u can get hit wit da gat bulletz goin thru ya back make ya backbone crack or u can get hit wit heata bulletz goin thru ya beat then i hop in my beema...but u on't wunt no problemz oh! but u on't wunt no problemz oh! but u on't wunt no problemz i gotta uzi thatah fuck u up at tha moviez ya stylez iz str8 doodoo/ thinkin u betta then me u must be fuckin kookoo/ i'm xperienced y'all jus new rookiez/ y'all niggaz tryna be tuff but u softa then fresh cookiez/ u a transvestite...a man wita pussy/ i wuz talkin ta ya gurl an like limp bizkit i did it all fa da nookie/ dawg i'ma pimp i slap u wit baby powder/ y'all niggaz watered down like cambellz clam chowder/ on a track i be eatin niggaz up/ u jus a coward i run up on niggaz in daylight like wut/ i can see in ya eyez u a wide dick recieva/ fuck a song cuz i chop u up wit da meat cleava/ man fuck this song i'm done wit this shit/ so i'ma end on this/ ya mom an tha coroner gon be dumpin ya body in a 6 foot pit ehh....1st open mic a little sloppy but oh well tell me wut y'all think i need feed back niggaz
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MAS ON 'EM!!!
P.O.T.H.E.A.D.  Gunn Play: RV's Original Duo Quote:
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11-02-04, 01:26 PM
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***cITYSLICka***
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IP: E31B AA42
Used The Word Nigga Too Many Times,wasn't Feelin' Dat.otherwise It Was Aight.could've Put More Effort Into It Also.6/10.keep Em Comin'.
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  I'm like CHUCKy dyin' to live in the flesh free of the BATTERY, ASSAULT n ROBBERY rapidly,wishin' cupid would clap at me N lift this evil spell so I can experience happilly evil backwards-see(down there) EVIL............backwards =............LIVE |
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11-02-04, 01:41 PM
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^Hoodz Legend^
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IP: 497B D710
^yeah i thought i used nigga 2 many timez...i coulda put more effort but i didn't feel like it...i could do a lot better tho...but yeah uppin 4 more feedback
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MAS ON 'EM!!!
P.O.T.H.E.A.D. Gunn Play: RV's Original Duo Quote:
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11-02-04, 03:41 PM
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^Hoodz Legend^
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IP: 497B D710
come on people i need some goddamn feedback
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MAS ON 'EM!!!
P.O.T.H.E.A.D. Gunn Play: RV's Original Duo Quote:
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11-02-04, 06:45 PM
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^Hoodz Legend^
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IP: 497B D710
uppin again...come on y'all leave sum goddamn feedback y'all peepin this shit an readin it then don't leave feedback....goddamn leave a nigga sum feedback y'all
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MAS ON 'EM!!!
P.O.T.H.E.A.D. Gunn Play: RV's Original Duo Quote:
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11-05-04, 10:13 AM
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^Hoodz Legend^
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IP: 0019 1D64
uppin again 4 sum feedback come on wit da goddamn feedback
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MAS ON 'EM!!!
P.O.T.H.E.A.D. Gunn Play: RV's Original Duo Quote:
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11-07-04, 12:05 AM
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..G Clique..
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IP: 3240 794D
hottness doggy str8 fiya keep that shit up
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11-09-04, 07:47 PM
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Banned
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IP: 46C3 56BC
used the N word to many times...
to many gun lines... preety basic no complexness invold... creativeness wasnt good it was basic... open ya mind up N get creative toss in a punch or u or use multis.... this is ya first drop so ia int hate'in cuz u aint even come out like u was cocky or the best so much props on ya 1st drop.... keep them coming u will get better with time.... 6.0 outta 10 |
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11-10-04, 06:36 PM
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Better than you..
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IP: ED10 1FA0
good shit mate....keep em coming.
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Spit it from the heart, spit a thousand darts, split ya head apart…
Emcees depart, like rubin carter my hurricane left u scarred… Like a spiked bat grammatical bar, like a wonderland drug… Tumble - ing like a flagon of rum and 2 blunts, like the funk baby… |
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