u drop first aight

iight how many bars?

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8 to 10 bars (16-20 lines)

kill em renegade yo is there crew votes?
and take a look at this shit and vote.
it's A.K.A. vs. dragon rage

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no crew votes

Yo im so sick its like when i spit u gettin attacked-by-a-fever/
And i always keep a nine on me like my hands attached-to-the-heater/
The Smith and Wesson will have ya body jerkin-and-twitchin/
U a fag, u don’t got a girl u just stay jerkin-ya-chicken/
Matter fact u fucka probably rape ya kids/
U want beef, ill come up in ya crib and take ya kids/
Forget the condom, ill fuck ya bitch and make ya kids/
Pull out the shotgun and shake-ya-kids/
Us a bitch u make elton john look street/
Ill shoot u up and leave u wit nothin but ya feet/
Beat u down so hard u wont be able to stand/
But u wont do shit cuz u a "gansta" from maryland/
My "lines" is addcitve like columbian cocaine/
So hot its like some one lit the mic up and cover it in propane/
I stay pimpin dimes if u kno what i mean/
But u get girls that make ru paul look like a beauty queen/

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U wanna go against me its not best in ya interest/
If u a thug ya crew must b soft jus like kittens/
I'll make ya whole hood nigga fell like summer/
When my gun start poppin it'll hit u harder than thunder/
U got the nerve to b talkin with less than 10 post/
Get ya ass hung off a bridge like u was in the Middle east/
I from Maryland where niggas get throwin in lakes/
In u live in trenton Where bitches like u gettin throwin in trunks/
Lets b real u ain't neva hold a gat in ya life/
When the 45 get ya body soft sort of like rice/
U know u messed up when u decided to battled the kid/
The pound will spin u around like the Young Prince kid/
U the R. kelly type u afraid of rejection/
So u get little girls to give u a one night session/
U don't get no bitches u only in to dudes/
No wonder niggas call u the New MICHAEL JACKSON/
Renegade nigga lets b real u fake as hell/
U wish u was like me in ya hood/
Im like bone crusher kid I ain't neva sacred/
And the mac can have u hearin wind blow threw ya head/ BITCH

yo i can't vote but it would be for renegade if i could. he had the punch lines. and envy was ok. but not the same you smell me.
vote on A.K.A. vs. Murder phreak or something like that.

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I vote envy, becasue renegade used alot of the word kids, it might seem petty, but thats the only reason i wasnt feelin his shit... apart from that you both had good punches and great lines...

vote in http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118313 if you would be so kind...

My votes goes to young ren.. he just had better punches... everything else was even keep at it tho envey you will get better.

Hit These Up Peeps:
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118312
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118165
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118148

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe

ayo vote ppl tha vote a had got disqualified so vote yall

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nextlevel is uppin for votes holla. we repay the favor

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nextlevel is uppin for votes holla. we repay the favor you heard.

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vote = renegade no doubt, whole verse was alot better, better punches, better flow, better creativity....

envy ya verse hardly had any flow at all...wtf? lol...

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