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Old 11-05-04, 12:16 AM   #1
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AUTOPSY!! Ft. S.M.L. & Dank (MUST LISTEN!!!)

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AutoMATIKā„¢ : Some Quick Acapella Shit!
DeadlyVision: My Life Story- Dv (Unfinished Track)
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Crazy shit no doubt...listen Hi Fi or MP3 if you can help it..quality is dope, but the Lo Fi makes it sound like pure shit...

Verses:
1. Dank
2. Me
3. S.M.L.

Hook:
Me


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Old 11-05-04, 07:43 PM   #2
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hmm....


ya'lll do well on ya shit../ but i dont liek ya styles... its not clear and proffesional.. and the flow is mechanical and kinda repetative.. the lyrics are fine, but the flow and delivery needs to be better... you shouldnt be spittin over a beat.. the beat shoudl be tryna spit over you, na mean ?

it was adedcent song .. dont get me wrong.. but i dont give nore more pats on the backs.. na mean ? we all here to elevate.. just letting u know what i dislike..

but what i did like, is that smoka had a nice tone and pitch to his verse.. wasnt just monotone and shit.. got me into the verse.. last dude.. needs a lil more cuyltivation.. he was clearer..

decent track.. stay doin it..-1
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Old 11-06-04, 12:43 AM   #3
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Dope shit...appreciate any replies..and I really mean it when I say you kats should listen to this..lol
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Old 11-06-04, 07:47 AM   #4
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this very well fits IJL....i was feeling it but the first 2 verses i could barely understand the third was a lot more clearer... stay up
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Old 11-07-04, 04:30 AM   #5
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Bump............
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Old 11-07-04, 04:48 AM   #6
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not bad.. lo-fi does make it sound like crap so i turned it off and listened to it hi-fi.. but uhmm the first 2 verses were clear, i dunno what happened to the last one.. but the beat was aight, smoka i'm guessing you were the first dude spittin'.. you verse was nice.. i'ma have my soundclicks in like two dayz so y'all can get at mine too.. pz..
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Old 11-07-04, 01:01 PM   #7
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2nd Dude actually...lol
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Old 11-08-04, 01:10 PM   #8
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I replied to a few audios yesterday...=|...thanks bitches
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Old 11-08-04, 03:01 PM   #9
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This is the shit Im talkin bout.

There's a reason why people dont like my shit.
Because I love this shit.
We just have a style that no one else has. An Likes.

I dont get it. Thought this was a dope ass track.
If you wanna collab, hit me up on PM's. My aim's broken.

People are to worried about soundin like Em n Jay Z.
Do ur own thing. Like smoka. -1
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