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Old 11-11-04, 06:41 PM   #1
JJFLOWSUM_5
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From: st.louis
i gotta let you go.....first song

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look baby gurl....u no i love you rite?probably more
than nething in da world....and i hate to do dis....but some things
juss gotta be done....wetha it's for da good....or wetha it's
for da bad....i love you

verse 1
u no eva since da first day we went out,i knew u had my heart,
i knew we'd be togetha foreva,cause you stole it from da start,
we always stuck togetha,like some glue or some tape,
we stopped all da nonsence,then we arose and awake,
u no i'll b thurr for you if you aint allready had it,
cause for me,lovin you is like a regular habit,
and u no i love ya bady,and ya structual basis,
been every where,and seen some faces,
but you da one i chose outta all i seen,
cause me sayin I LOVE YOU is somethin dat i actually mean,
im sorry to say dis,and im sorry to let you know,
but i gotta move on,and i gotta let you go,


chorus 2x
im sorry to tell you,but i gotta move on,
juss walk out da door,but put my shoes on,
juss give me a lil space,and let me breathe,
i gotta pack my bags,and i gotta leave,


verse 2
juss think of what we both been through,
you was hurtin me and i was hurtin you,
dont think of it as a loss for you,juss a loss for both,
like you was in da dark and you last da ropes,
i admit i was happy,but i gotta end it,
yea for good,not suspended,
in otha words we aint takin a break,dis is all for good,
i gotta end it now,dis is da way it should,
i always felt warm,when u was close to me,
but it's all ova cause it's supposed to be,
it aint up for grabs,it aint up for show,
but i gotta move on,and i gotta let you go,

chorus 2x
im sorry to tell you,but i gotta move on,
juss walk out da door,but put my shoes on,
juss give me a lil space,and let me breathe,
i gotta pack my bags,and i gotta leave,
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Old 11-11-04, 06:48 PM   #2
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lookin for some feedback...come on yall
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Old 11-11-04, 07:47 PM   #3
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yo homie wats poppin dats some tight ish you be spittin keep it up homie
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Old 11-11-04, 09:18 PM   #4
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yea mayne thanx foe da feedbac..uppin for some more
ill return da fav
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Old 11-11-04, 10:00 PM   #5
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nice...chorus was dope...feeling the emotion...first verse could use a little work, but it was still a pretty good drop...nice shit homie...get at me...1
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Old 11-12-04, 09:50 AM   #6
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Yo Thanx Magic...uppin For Some More
Come On Yall
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Old 11-12-04, 09:54 AM   #7
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yo' this was a good drop.i was feelin' the chorus and the second verse the most.8/10.keep it up.
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Old 11-12-04, 10:13 AM   #8
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aiight thanx....now i no i should work on dat first
verse,and keep up....thanx for helpin yall
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