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| Phenom | Kingz | Dabatos | TonySelf | Tha Q | Half Breed | Tito | 7th End | RV Radio  |
11-10-04, 11:42 PM
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...The Truth...
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New "Block Out" first verse
IP: 88C4 C811
yo, dis da 1st verse only, gimme sum feedback
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/3/g...ndthefuture.htm
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...Done Wit The Games...
...Time to Get On My Grown Man... |
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11-11-04, 12:16 AM
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New to RV
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IP: 947A 2011
Lol..
Umm... You kinda sound weird, I thought you was mumbling at first... You have to get emotion and delivery and RAP... You're talking.....and you are offbeat like crazy... Work on ya flow.... Constructive criticism, NOT HATE.... Basically work on sticking to the beat, Work on emotion, Mic presence, Flow and get a little more lyrical.. Because you're rhymign is basic and You basically have no style. Elevate. |
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