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If Introspect, Valor, Nos Or Indpeh vote for me i will leave this site permanetly


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I will watch out for any dickriders

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Check in by: 12-06-04 at 01:16 AM

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WICKEDCLOWN has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-03-04 01:25 AM.

FlOw InTeLLiGeNt has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-03-04 01:44 AM.

Aiight Also Empire Cannot Vote I Repeat If He Votes You Lose Matter Of Fact Im Gonna Black list Him

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Im a sinner but i like it...... The winner by a hike bitch
I'll slice ya inner thigh and let this quitter die in crisis
Im phat when writing ...... You'll get clapped for biting
You wont be on here for long cuz you'll get banned for riding
Im gonna be droppin this dumb geek cuz im hot like a sun beam
And i'll put a end to your green streak like i was washin ya undies
You askin for ya life.... but ya games weak its done and simple
You'll be on ya knees talking to God like nuns in temples
Bigpappa76 or wickedclown ill kill you with ease cuz it dont matter
Leave ya alias feelin this beatin like a conjoined twin with a full bladder
Everyone documents my verse's becuase im the greatest topic
You couldnt be the center of attention if you was the latest gossip
So you Claim youre doing damage, but your just leaving some minimal flesh wounds
Plus you've been handed more 'beatings' than 'george michaels dick in restrooms'
I bless goons... You spit cuz its too hard to swallow this
When i get you confused & nauseated like RuPaul's Gynecologist
I lean to pummle fools... break ya spleen and stomach too
Like the first letter in ya name i succeed and 'double you'
Im shitting this son you really dont wanna be lifting a gun
Cuz i'll bitch smack you in the mouth and injure ya tongue

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uppin for HONEST VOTES... hot battle homie, and to introspect, valor and Nos... suck my dick

uppin this shit...........................................

Voted For: WICKEDCLOWN

Flows Verse

Punches: Were aight but only a couple were eye catching in my opinion which was dissapointing also the fact that you were using self-glory really to me seemed like you were wasting lines whereas a lil re-wording could've reinforced the verse

Personals: Not many to be honest 1 or 2 but woulda been helpful seeing as your opponent put a few on you.

Vocab: Some nice wording good vocab indeed i had no arguments with that it was quite good

Structure: Could be improved didn't help the flow in parts but i'm guessing this was rushed so not much time to add finishing touches.

Flow: Nice flow but like i said slipped a lil in parts where it went real long in certain places work on that for future references.

Rhyming: real good rhyming in there was quite enjoyable if only the self-g bits and punches were harder though.

WICKED's Verse

Punches: Seemed like you tried but not really effective i think Flow pipped you there i'm afraid try and work on them again for future references.

Personals: Personals Dayum that was mainly your content of the verse jus throwing personals in there but parts of your verse were damaged by the self-glory again like Flows but you def took it here.

Vocab: Grr angry style you did seem angry and the personals and the dissing made up for punches which actually is unique coz get punches and you got a dope mix to do even better up in RV. But try and avoid the constant swearing though lol.

Structure: Stretched...work on it like i said lose some swear words...you'll probably find thats your solution.

Flow: However flow i had no real problems wit prolly coz the beat i read it too but i felt the flow to this so thumbs up there.

Rhyming: Basic but effective with the personals used i think try and up your wordplay and your rhyming wil develop naturally.

V/WickedClown because it really boiled down to 3 main things punches, personals & the level of dissing...and WC took 2 outta 3 because the weight of the personals added to the level of dissing and really thats what wins battles.

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uppin this.............................................. ....

thought i was gonna vote huh....................

an wicked keep talkin that shit an i swear to fuckin god i will own you lil fuckin twit am only about 6 hours from maine so dont push your luck...

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Introspect u waste of space come fine me bitch lmao i live in bangor maine dawg bring tha shit. lmao you internet goof. lmao.................................

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Voted For: FlOw InTeLLiGeNt

i think flow intelligent got this one. he had better wordplay, and some nice punches in there...
wickedclown had a nice verse, but kinda fell off near tha end to me, and his punches werent that strong.he took personals tho
wickedclown-yo verse was structured aight, but u kinda had stretched ur lines a couple of times. that took points away. ur punches were somewhat nice, but didnt hard hard each time, but u had some nice personals. ur wordplay was nice, and most of ur bars had good rhyming. not too simple...i see ur kinda advanced, thats coo...but ur all around verse lacked sumthing i think.usually i would state what, but i dont know..HONESTLY i wasnt feeling ur verse.
flow intelligent-u had a killer verse. ur punches were on point. u started out kinda slow in ur first 2 barz, but yo all around flow took my vote. ur personals were coo, but that was tha one category i think u lost in...they werent that hot if u ask me...i liked ur wordplay and creativitie in ur verse...keep doing yo shit homie...u gunna be sick soon
both yall gunna be sick soon....overall-yall both had a nice verse, i told yall what yall lacked in, so yall should take that and better urself, and i told yall what yall did good, so better urselves with that also...wickedclown, its no hate dawg, i just wasnt feeling ur verse too much...its coo, its just one vote...but yall nice with tha flow, and punches and metaphores and shit...just try and stay creative and elevate urselves...


oh,and plz return tha vote...http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=162907 ....too many battles gettn slept on on RV...i just radomnly picked this battle to vote on...plz return tha vote...1...if that doesnt work, its also down in sig...pz...NO HATE WICKED...