[U]Just started writing....

Who do u hate? I hate George Bush
when he was due his mama wouldn't push
dat punk's just gonna be another dead president
because of the way he treats the U.S residents
he didn't give a fuck about the deaths of 9/11
well i guess it is was just a another fuckin burden
U all should already know Bin Laden was a threat
because the prez & the army ain't catch him yet
went to Iraq for the weapon's of destruction
he just gonna leave the U.S in fatal condition
what he talks about is just nonsense
and it's all at the U.S's expence
He got bitches marching in his parade
but all Bush is playing is his fuckin' charades........


Wat ya'll think????

that was pretty good, just work on flow, and harder hitting rhymes, might be a lot better.
i'd say 7/10 in all

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thx 4 da advice i'll try dat

no problem

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lmao hahahah rofl forsaken this old school ....

lmfaoooo that was my first.....a week later i'm topical god lmfao

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not bad flow aight...
preety good...
all around 7.2 outta 10...

keep'em coming...

^^^^that was like 7 months ago dude i'm godlier LMFAOOOO @ this shit damn you TRASE!

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lmao....................

oh well.....................

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Got type blend that is like the wind merry and carry
Balloon out of sight so my route right direction it vary
Upwards, my heat is like the street, wear down the heel of shoes
Share crowns and deal with fools, kneel to rules and feel the blues
Of being controlled