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11-15-04, 05:27 PM | #1 | ||||||
..::shut the fuck up::..
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Up Tight
IP: 07E0 A9F2
sometimes I just wanna shut my room and be all alone just lets some fuckin self asteem of shout and moan Cause I keep gettin into these fuckin petty arguments and fuck bitch ur wasteing my time so i'll be all offence can't stop thoughts in my head shreddin impulses sendin all these fuckin thoughts deep in are mix wid junk blendin to confuzed but an't gonna back down and lose sick off the abuse bitch fuck off bitch you fuckin jews! im swingin on my own like an army need someone to carm me fuck all this preassure in my head is makin me go fuckin barmy and bitch you don't judge you don't even know me so blowme I only get on wid dudes who act kool and real who are homies |
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11-15-04, 05:29 PM | #2 | ||||
.Retro-Bution.
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IP: 2F3B A8C3
GAY all the WAY^
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11-15-04, 05:52 PM | #3 | |||||
Banned: Cheating
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You Should Tryout For LVN
IP: 28AD 5545
A mAyne You Should Tryout For LVN If You lookin For A Crew Jus Check It out in My Sig
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11-15-04, 05:54 PM | #4 | ||||
.Retro-Bution.
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IP: 2F3B A8C3
LVN? Get Real Nigga, That Crew is Wack...
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11-15-04, 05:58 PM | #6 | |||||
.Retro-Bution.
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IP: 2F3B A8C3
Or What Wigga?
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^ Sound's Like you wanna Masterbate...Ha ha
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11-16-04, 08:49 AM | #8 | ||||
Hates Fucking Idiots
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IP: 07E0 A9F2
sometimes I just wanna shut my room and be all alone
just lets some fuckin self asteem of shout and moan ^ flows but 2nd line wacked it out wit the wording Cause I keep gettin into these fuckin petty arguments and fuck bitch ur wasteing my time so i'll be all offence ^ weak rhyme not a strong bar can't stop thoughts in my head shreddin impulses sendin all these fuckin thoughts deep in are mix wid junk blendin ^ an aight bar prolly the best u put out nice wordplay to confuzed but an't gonna back down and lose sick off the abuse bitch fuck off bitch you fuckin jews! ^ 1st line aight but 2nd line ruined it im swingin on my own like an army need someone to carm me fuck all this preassure in my head is makin me go fuckin barmy ^ armys aint alone...2nd line aight and bitch you don't judge you don't even know me so blowme I only get on wid dudes who act kool and real who are homies ^ flowed but the closer was weak a basic multi though Overall 4.5/10 u need to add more wordplay and also take time to word ya verse out better
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11-16-04, 09:17 AM | #10 | ||||
Hates Fucking Idiots
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IP: 07E0 A9F2
HA HA HA Bitch if you can't take the critisism u in the wrong game give up now
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11-16-04, 12:04 PM | #11 | |||||||
New to RB
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IP: C11A B834
that was whack all the way.......i was feelin it kinda.......until your little anit-semitism....nazi lil retard......figure out how to write somethin that makes sense.....i dont even wanna know what race you are with this racism bullshit......overall 0/10 i wouldah given you bettah but you dont deserve it.....try bein a lil more creative
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