aight yo'
15 bars,
2 days for post,
no d/r, crew votes, or hate votes

yo choice on to spit first or not

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1st Battle In Legends
Bars Of War - Champ
L.L.L. - Former HWeight Champ
S.S. - Hall Of Fame

The Eclipse...

fuck dat keystyle right now since you active and i'mma do da same

yo nigga to put that shit nicely yo rap is real whack/
you just madd cuz broke styles broke yo back and yo shit up/
face it nigga give up, you got stuck, and then you got fucked/
like i fucked yo motha' and yes we kept it undercova'/
but we both know i be the reason you got a lil brotha/
but yo i'ma keep away from the personal shit/
cuz yo flow is elementary and my rhymes is sick/
you heard that, sick nigga, i think this time/
i'm lyrically blowin ya mind, e-dub/
and yo even though you online/
you still ain't nuthin but a fake thug/
i dont even know why i'm battlin this bitch/
but i'ma fuck you real good make you walk wit a switch/
out of ya league now? i break you like styles/
i think we both know who holds they shit down/

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1st Battle In Legends
Bars Of War - Champ
L.L.L. - Former HWeight Champ
S.S. - Hall Of Fame

The Eclipse...

john is tryna spit uh oh

check me


u just been awarded fo being da wackest mc
any body ever heard off..
call me gotti on dis battle, cuz you know
da results is all murdah!!/
grab you by ur throat and yank out ur oxygen tube..
damn my first 2 bars just made it a 1 side battle
wtf is wrong with dis dude?/
you seen me spittin at brokez and u though dub wuz
a joke..cuz aint come hard like da shyt canibus wrote?
lil-D *(huh) it's time to get smoked/
(awwwwhhh! why me?) cuz u got da brainz to post in my
threads but dont got da heart to try-me..think of lyrics
as a personality, yo shyt still wont be grimey/
smack u up side da head and maybe ur recongnize..
same foolz like u get ripped tryin to dent dub enterpise/
and i'm sorry to say but 'ur whole verse wuz a got-damn-it fucking lie/
holla back after u train in elevation..cuz right now ur whole style son is a imatation..with creativity graphics
plainer den a '86' cartoon animation..ask u dis for da 1st and last time "do u know who u facing'/
obviously you don have a clue..but ur remeber da name
after i finish flaming you..as i marry you, fuck you,
and divorce you like andrea did to erykah badu/
so look foward to a L while i stack another W..
say it aont so..den fuck you/

35% of me

uppin fo votez

seen some errors but still original thou...

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hands down

the battle goes to Dub

not hatein' or anything but Dallas
your flow was way to simple

while E-Dub had everything from
vocab to punches

keep workin' on your skills L.D.->Local Dumby

(peep my battle)

......and then you got fucked/
like i fucked yo motha' and yes we kept it undercova'/
but we both know i be the reason you got a lil brotha/......

THAT WZ ILL.... FLOW WZ STRAIGHT. BUT E DUB HAD BETTA MULTI'S.AND BESIDE THE LINE I QUOTED FROM LIL',, I DIDN'T FEEL ANY REAL PUNCHES.

...."u just been awarded fo being da wackest mc
any body ever heard off..
call me gotti on dis battle, cuz you know
da results is all murdah!!/"....

...."holla back after u train in elevation..cuz right now ur whole style son is a imatation..with creativity graphics
plainer den a '86' cartoon animation..ask u dis for da 1st and last time "do u know who u facing'/"......

DID N'T FIND ANY GOOD META'S ON EITHER FLOW....WELL NOTHIN I REALLY LIKED ANYWAY.

BUT I VOTE FOR

E DUB

BETTA WORDPLAY

2-0

dis probally will be da quickest ko i ever gave-out

uppin for 1 more

WELL I GOTTA HAND THIS BATTLE TO E-DUB..SIMPLY..HIS VERSE WAS MUCH STRONGER THAN LILDALLAS'S.....E-DUB CAME WITH BETTER PUNCHES AND WORDPLAY.....

u just been awarded fo being da wackest mc
any body ever heard off..
call me gotti on dis battle, cuz you know
da results is all murdah!!/"....

LIKED THAT SHIT......

VOTE=E-DUB..........
YO E YA STILL ON FOR THAT BATTLE............

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vote= e-dub better punches the flow was a little simple but better verse

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and sign up for the battle league would yeah, also show up if your already in the league