I breathe the breath that expels from ya soul-swallow it whole
Slide my lips tracingly down ya neck-while drapin my body over ya flesh
Subtle kisses glide ya chest as u feel my breasts cover ya stomach like a warm waves crest………
Lips trip over a forbidden list of daydreams hit with sexual trysts-I want to kiss the bliss that has my imagination-gripped --heartbeat flipped and fantasies tripped
Taste the evolution of genes gliding out ya tip
Mouth quivers body shivers-Goosebumps form from the touch ya hand delivers-
All in mah day seems are plain schemes to capture u in naked day dreamz
Exquisite movements gloom shifts to my imprudence new hints give blue prints of true gifts dat few get
Touch inside me feel the tide breach- rising waters fill my lining -
Full force mind set off course by rhythms penetratin finding
Ya depth is indescribable deemed dirty by design- telltale stories read b4 the rhyme
Pull back the attack I forgot to breath lost my sanity in a moments gleam
Bodies fiend while my voice screams and u plead wit me to take the lead
I rise in fainted mind to slide into ya beautiful mind
Every measurement every pleasure lent u drip upon my treasured chest

whoa, ya can have verbal extacy with me anytime. im still in awe with this. nice stuff and imagery was on key, feelin it for real, probably in the wrong way to. sorry that just why im TeRRIFYING. stay up.

joey

Ya verbal extasy sounds good to me

NICE PIECE MA

KEEP IT UP

HOLLA AT ME

ayo boo, you posted on my piece so imma post on yours, this was a wonderful piece, good rhyme scheme and flow, good imagery... you got ill skills for the poetry game... peace!
oh yeah and if ya every wanna try that verbal extasy shit you described... my aim is Oo pHraNtiK oO
haha, just playin girl... keep it up!
~oNe

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