first to five votes
three vote k.o
15 line max.
verses due tomorrow i'll post later today probably tonight if you busy just hit me up at my e-mail and i'll change the dead line raven420_ca@yahoo.com

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win loss record 18-19 with 7 k.o's


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here's my verse :

People only call you little cause it matches your talent/
Your only a textcee cause I cut out your tongue so you’d remain silent/
Your bull shit story about being a gangsta will never fly on the street/
Your more like a French foot doctor cause your always facing de feet/(defeat)
The mafia your with must be in to counterfeit things cause their down with you fake raps/
Leave this kid thinking it’s Christmas cause I’ve already got this battle under wraps/
Your like nas stealing your thug stories from real gangstas/
Posting your verse is useless like playing a game of basketball with out all the playas/
With your rhymes you should be a golfer cause their never up to par/
Like drunks, bad high jumpers and failure lawyers your not getting past this bar/
That’s swinging for your head dinting your skull in/
Like girls sittin down when the toilet seat’s down in the standings your falling/

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win loss record 18-19 with 7 k.o's


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Yo Yo Yo whassup son, you really nothin but a bitch/
I snap yo neck leave you in a ditch, at the flip of a switch/
I rip yo ballz off and shove them down yo throat/
Cuz many peepz like mah lyrics coast to coast. but ya momz favors mah dick tha most/
u have fuckin dsl, which means u got the dick suckin lips/
Son we all kno u like them dirty dicks/
Yum yum bubble gum/
Don't spit, swallow it bitch! look what you did, theres a puddle of cum/
You cant rep it like me son, your so whack/
i grab you snap yo back in dis lethal attack/
Boy u getting beat to the ground and stomped on like "Dirt"/
Cuz you diss me first, so i respond back wit dis verse, its like a curse, im just making yo life worst/
Son when i spit i leave niggaz scorched like fire/
Gangsta rollin on 22's dirtboy gots a falt tire, do tha rap game a favor and just retire/
cuz ya rhymes is like ol milk....expire/

Yo,..my vote goes to DirtyBoy,..he came much harder wit' the punchlines. Both verses were pretty dope but DirtyBoy came alot stronger in wordplay and punchlines and scheme. Nice battle!

Vote = DirtyBoy
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Gotta give it to dirtyboy. Both flows were sick but db's came harder, luvin the shit.
vote=dirtyboy

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Leave this kid thinking it’s Christmas cause I’ve already got this battle under wraps/
Your like nas stealing your thug stories from real gangstas/
Posting your verse is useless like playing a game of basketball with out all the playas/

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That shit right there was prolly the worst from Dirt boys verse and even that was above his opponents shit! Good attempts from both but dirt-boy69 took this with the flow and wordplay, close battle though, kinda hard to call.Keep it up you two, and my advice for Dirtboy is...up your vocab son because right now its very basic, but dont over-do it liuke N-Demik, you gotta get the correct balance.Try hooking up a thesaurus, thats always by my comp when im battling-it helps!!
And shorten down on your bars, try to make 'em the same lenght if you can because it helps with the flow, and try to put more multi's in your shit, i dont like using them actually but thats what people look mfor in verses....

that's the k.o i win good battle guy

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win loss record 18-19 with 7 k.o's


and sign up for the battle league would yeah, also show up if your already in the league