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Old 11-14-04, 12:06 AM   #1
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America The Beautiful

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as i step from the street after a long night of fast racin
and cravin the taste of blacks from the gas station
..i pass hations..jackin packed raisons with masked faces
and gats, razors and bats..barely phasin englassed asians*
which lack raises and everyday go back to their wack wages
infact..neighbors stay strapped and pack for heat like Shaq's Lakers**
raged tax payers in aingst upon the corners with more than riot signs
chyme when bitches critisize or rhymes like our spits were violent types
silent nights?..never! this is AMERICA THE BEAUTIFUL...
where beautiful's disputable and beautifuls refutable
but keep in mind we live in times when people try to b feeble minded
an when ppl cry..noone peeps a *sigh*..they just sweep aside the problem and dont sweep behind it
thats 'cheap' defined man its weak and sly..so take some initiative more
i dont mean to bitch but ima take from the rich and give to the poor...
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Old 11-14-04, 12:30 AM   #2
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ayo this was hot.......

......u had some good multies and good vocab in it.......

.....ur structure and flow was on point........

.......nice work keep it up........
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Old 11-14-04, 07:18 PM   #3
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this was actually very nice...everything was real good until maybe the last 2 lines...flow kinda fucked me up there...but other than that, this was a nice drop...8/10 dawg nice job...1
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Old 11-14-04, 08:15 PM   #4
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this was tite...i was especially feelin the multis...it reminded me of mosh from em...i liked it a lot...keep dat shit comin...
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Old 11-14-04, 08:42 PM   #5
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yo dis was pretty tight but like MAGIK said ur flow was
kinda fucked up...but then like LIL D said u did have good
multi's so i have to give u a 9/10
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Old 11-14-04, 09:03 PM   #6
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that really suck
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Old 11-15-04, 01:54 PM   #7
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Thats My Peeps.damn Good Drop C.i Already Know U Be Doin' Ya Thang So Lemme Up It For.
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EVIL............backwards =............LIVE
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Old 11-15-04, 02:02 PM   #8
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damn boi..u should hit me up 4 a collab, n Love i think we need to do dat collab SOON lol...but yea u had some tight multis, da structure n flow was ON point...good way to rep V.T...good 1...10/10
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