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Old 11-13-04, 04:36 PM   #1
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Yo This Is Something I Did Want To Writt..And My ''influences'' from Rv

Triple N just knowing that your gonne be on tour with Terror Squad
DIstilled For Showing Me This Website and helped Me Out
Will A Peer seeing that girls too can do better that others
Ice PIck Cuz His Lyrics Are Dope As Hell
Lil C Cuz i was impress by his lyrics too
Fearless Profets cuz his beats are tight
and SDizzle...everything i see from you sucks...specially your picture
I Did'nt make this so you could tell me...your flow sucks,need better vocab...anyway here it is...wasint my best...

We're Glad Seing Triple N On Tour With Terror Squad/
But its Sad Seing SDizzel Sucking So Much And Being Bad/
Ice Pick Handle's It And Have The Trick To Give Us Nice Lyrics/
And Hey Yo Congratulation Distilled For Being Rap President/
Will A Peer Best Femcee Hope Your Proud Of RV/
For All The Newby's Like Me Needs Feeback Please/
We Want To Be Good As Emcee's Like Lil C Who's New As Me/
Its Been A While That Im Listening To Some Beats/
Congratulation Fearless Profets Too,I Fucking Love His Beats,IDo/
Don't Judge This,Did'nt Do My Best,I Was Feeling It,Well I Guess/
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Old 11-13-04, 05:51 PM   #2
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this was trash...
no offense but it did....

no flow..
wasnt creative..
where is my name???
ahh u need to try this again just in a whole new way...

-3.0 (-- thats how bad it was...
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Old 11-13-04, 06:41 PM   #3
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i know its bad,,,i never said that it was good...its just my influences of RV...if your name's not tere its bcuz you aint one of my influence...but they're still more that i forgot...
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Old 11-13-04, 09:57 PM   #4
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dawgs u didnt even ryme...that shit u wrote up above rymed better then the verse did...slow down an take more time with what u writing...
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