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11-14-04, 03:07 PM
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Massacre Night.....
IP: FA63 454B
Moon Fade's Into Sight, On This Crisp Halloween Night Scene Is Set, Teen's Wrecked and Lookin For a Cheap Fright But I'm Different, I'm On a Rampage Trackin Down Some Nigga, Pressure Toppling The Fringe Of My Control, Nervous Pinky On The Trigger Im On a One Man Mission To Torture and End This Hoe Used to Be a Rebel, Had No Dough Or a Home To Go As i Jogged Down The Sidewalk, I see The Dude, So I Follow Various Disguise's Bamboozle Me Some Bussin' The Mask Of Zorro He Turn's down a Alleyway, This My Oppurtunity, My Chance Muscle's and Emotion's Overwhelm and Enhance as i Take My Stance Run Up To the Foo' and Impale Screwdriver's In His Ankle's Tryin Ta Tear a Piece Of Flesh To Show as a Sample The Bitch Groan's as he Try's to Repel My Attack He Grab's My Hand But I drive a Blunt Knife Into His Cataract The Blood Ooze's Out Of His Eye, It Get's Stuck between his EyeLid's Nigga's Done...Ima Go after his Wifey, His Fam and his Unborn Kid... But After all That I thought Did The Punishment Fit The Crime? I Mean all He Did was Fail To Pay The Extra Dime! The Character in that Piece was a Shopkeeper, In That Respect the last line was the only one relevant! But It's alright...  Last edited by ..:Outbreak:.. : 11-14-04 at 04:02 PM. |
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11-14-04, 04:04 PM
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IP: 1C85 6ED6
this was raw...9/10...keep droppin...
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11-14-04, 04:06 PM
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IP: D678 696A
nice drop....liked ur sense of wordplay and the plot...and how u described things
8/10 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=160141 <<<<<<return tha favor stay up 1~~~~~~~~
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11-14-04, 04:08 PM
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IP: FA63 454B
Thank's was Just a Quick Keystyle
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11-14-04, 04:58 PM
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IP: 0825 899A
Yo dat was pretty good,
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