Can people please drop feed back on my new song and tell me if my word play and rhymes are gettin better i'd appreciate it this song was a pretty decent one I made so it's worth listening to... Click on the audio to view it below

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Flow is best I've heard from you... you really need to check audio assistance and fix your quality though cuz its beyond horrible.... punches were so-so nothing spectacular but not bad... keep droppin and concentrate on ur quality cuz its the most stand out weakness you got.

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alrite when u say quality do u mean my change my voice or voice emotion?

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No I mean your sound quality is shit... its filled with hisses and pops and distortion.

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thats because of my microphone it's fucked Im goin to get a new one for chrismas so i'll be able to make my songs more clear and no problems in the back ground and shit... Least I was pretty good on the beat on this song I listen to peeps advice about rideing the beat so im okay at that.

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you dont need a new mic to improve quality... your going to need to learn to do it with a new mic or not... all mics leave small pops and light distortion automatically, not to mention the problems you get on hard exhales-- trust me... work on your quality... Look in the audio assistance forum and find threads by Opey or Alca on cool edit. You will find ways to Make yourself sound better through the various equalizers and settings and everything to learn can be applied to nice mics, shitty mics whatever.

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I know mad dogs your friend so how do you feel about this diss do you feel a bit insulted? cause Im only returning the diss he once made to me so it's only fair I give it back to him aight. Anyway to the amount of people sayin i'm wack do you actually respect me a little bit more now for provin that I can rap and flow well on a microphone just wanted some advice from you cause you could turn me into a better mc you know I take this shit serious.

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I respect you for tryin.... as far as mad dog goes. thats between you two... i just want competiton from someone.

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well I think i actually found a way to stop the hissing shit on my software it'll cut the hissing sound out so im is that all I need to do??? I'm only at an early stage yet but thanks for sayin i've improved....

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Competition?.......Why didn't you say so?

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word... i thought I did... multiple times.

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check bitchslapped... im waitin on battles like soldiers that cant sleep.

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dude im not gonna battle you... you are way up my league

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nah I was refferin to that pussy Kontroverzey and that other homo bullet who i called out about a week ago but no battle thread.

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