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Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 12-17-04 at 10:39 PM

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lil C.A.L.I has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-14-04 10:44 PM.

stupid ass pm'in me about wat wat u wanna rap about
Y? u sayin u the king of lu
you suck 'PERIOD' need to get a clue
sayin i stepped to the best layin kings to rest
god didnt like u cuz ur raps suck u weren't blessed
ill leave u like a bitch rapped and beat
like a straight ho going into heat
name a real rapper from Honolulu 8- 0- 8
lines droppin so much weight turning you straight
make u wanting more have u wishing for your fate
your rhymes are worse then my bad day
droppin lil pussy shit so ima have u get it weigh

Pastor Choi has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-15-04 01:16 PM.

It’s Cali… no wait… lil’ Cali… Empire’s #1 clit rider…
He says he spits fire… dip shit… you’re a big liar…
You need elevation? Consult PSA… they high all the time…
It’s Todd Choi… Odd boy… bout to make you die on a rhyme…
The only way you could win is if big bro Cali ghost writes…
Your still ill and we chill… oh no… both psyches…
The fire truck has put you out… once… twice… how bout thrice…
At your murder scene… all you will hear is gunshots and loud cries…
What do you know about Thug Life… wanna be 2pac….
Only phenomal talent is the fuck life… takin’ for free… 2 cocks…
And Hawaii is paradise… too bad your stuck on da mainland…
You take cum shots and run ops for cali… u da ‘brain man’…

*explanations*
Line 1 - Empire’s new name is Cali… and he’s lil’ cali
Line 3 - Pot Smoker’s alliance... smoke pot... get high... get it..
Line 5 – Claims Cali is his big Brother
Line 7 – MC Firetruck has beat him 3 times
Line 9 – His old names were ThugLife & 2Pac

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upping for votes..............
I woke up early for this.....

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Voted For: Pastor Choi

Man this shit was one sided, lil C.A.L.I you need to elvate somethin wicked.
Pastor Choi ya punches and Meta's was tight. Ya multi's were str8 too.

Best Line: You need elevation? Consult PSA… they high all the time…

thanks for the vote... appreciate it.
.........50

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Voted For: Pastor Choi

this was a fairly weak battle...... ummmmmmmm ill break it down tho.....

Pastor- flow was ok, lose the ... after every line it fucks it up... structure was iffy because of the ... ummmmm rhyme scheme was ok... there was WAY to much self glorification goin on in ya verse.... punches and personals were fairly good... you used good wordplay, its plain to see that your in elevation mode but youll get there........ 4.5/10

LilCali....- well your improving slowly like ive said before... structure still needs work, the lines need to be more even and that will help the flow that was off a little bit... punches and personals were ok but some were a little tired and played... there was less self glory in yours and thats a pluss... creativity was off but your elevating slowly but u will get there dawg.....3/10

Overall Pastor got this one... better punches and personals... both of yall need elevation but keep it up and youll get there................

VOTE- Pastor....................

Voted For: Pastor Choi

I don't really need to break this one down...

Pastor took this hands down. Came with harder punches a little bit of wordplay, even a few multies. But Pastor you still need to elevate, no hate. Your verse was mediocre, but it was better than lil cali's.
Lil Cali, your structure was off and your rhymes are still simple and played. You had no connecting punches and wordplay/personals were nonexistent. You need to keep elevating.

V//Pastor

RTF at a link in my sig, do it honestly...

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thanks 9th... on behalf of me & lil' cali... we appreciate you taking your time to vote.

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Voted For: Pastor Choi

Lil Cali aka Thuglife:
ok that was so weak dont even bother putting links in your verse because thats wack...but no hate you need to elevate battling vets your bound to be merked...you need work on punches and wordplay even know there like the same thign but so...just work on them stucture vocab metaphores and punches and you'll do fine in the future...lmao

Pastor Choi:
not bad from a newbie hehe...jk...but still your punches were tight good use of the witty metaphores mixed into your worplay..the use of good flow was good and you had a real good stucture to also clai had a good flow forgot to say that...but yea i feel Pastor choi took this without trying...No Hate...

Vote: Pastor Choi

return the favour in my battle verse 50cent_meurderinc.
iight thanks