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11-15-04, 09:57 PM
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"Rough Times"(unfinished)
IP: 28AD 5545
This was a poetic scriptures collab i did with valor, this is only my verse, i'm still waiting for him to finish this......I thought i'd post it, to get some feedback, i think my flow improved, a bit, but the quality needs some work still............holla!!! lol
 1st one on top....... http://www.soundclick.com/bands/0/fluidmoon.htm
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11-15-04, 10:05 PM
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DaTrus Is A Bitch!
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IP: E5EB 11E6
.::Said Your Links Didn't Work::. Aiyo...When We Collabing? ~R~ |
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11-15-04, 10:07 PM
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IP: 28AD 5545
The top link works........1...EDIT~now they both work..lol
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11-15-04, 10:58 PM
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The Ups and Downs of Life
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IP: D666 F54C
word flow was pretty good... especially for ur second time droppin an audio rhyme, comin up in the game, beat was nice you kinda had an old school flavor to your isht... keep droppin.
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11-15-04, 11:03 PM
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IP: 5F90 9B8B
loved it... i always love a girlt hat can rap.. especially when you can stay on beat shit was deep keep it up fam nice drop fluid
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11-16-04, 02:25 AM
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IP: 3240 794D
Thanks guys, i appreciate all the love, this track wil be finished tomorrow, hook and all..lol
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11-16-04, 11:45 AM
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The Ups and Downs of Life
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IP: D666 F54C
Fam gets upped cuz thats what I do.
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11-16-04, 12:07 PM
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IP: 07E0 A9F2
this shit really sounded really tight I liked the beat and you seem to have really nice flow and I like your voice 2.... 9/10
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11-16-04, 11:04 PM
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IP: 28AD 5545
Thanks peeps....i'ma keep it up....word
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11-17-04, 05:53 PM
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IP: 3240 794D
upppppppppppiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnnnnnn............... 1
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11-17-04, 07:04 PM
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Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
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yup tight track good flow liked the beat rhymes were good keep dopin ur thing look out for our collab comin to a sc page near u soon lmao
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11-17-04, 09:05 PM
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Flyweight
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IP: EE03 4689
yeah i liked it and if it was only your 2nd time droppin' audio major props, i'd like to hear the complete version when thats done so post it when it is....keep droppin'
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11-18-04, 05:35 PM
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IP: D25B 9914
original shit... you came ya own flow and it worked well, i wanna here the finished song
u got funk gurl
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11-18-04, 09:06 PM
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IP: 07E0 A9F2
Yeh, I liked this track, you flow is dopeness, ride the beat well.
GOt an original style like Kingz said, you should try get a couple more verse and a hook on there lol,yeh, dope track for what you got done, I'll definetly give some props to the finished version.Oh yeh, and you killed IdaughterHoez. 1
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11-20-04, 07:17 AM
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Flyweight
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IP: 021A 03C9
Just listened to it 3 times.
Voice clear, flow is steady...and its ur own style so I like it. U rode the beat well... Great job Fluid! I notice U ended the flow at :47 ......seem like u let it drift, but maybe u did it like that purposely. I think you could have snuck one more bar in there to finish your verse which would have ended at :52. The beat seems as if it was fit to end the verse at :52, and then the hook comes in. Nevertheless u did ur thang! Im looking forward to hearing more of u. I like listening to u in fact! Keep it up! One!
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