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Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 11-21-04 at 11:56 PM

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Mentally Ill has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-21-04 11:30 PM.

DrasticMeasureZ has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-21-04 11:30 PM.

fuck ya basic flows-your whack just face it hoe--
dras refuses to step it up-otherwise he'd break his toes--
those multis you should use, or at least try thinkin fool--
draz beatin me? he pulled it off.. of his list of things to do--
you couldn't possibly defeat me, ur rap tools weaker--
cuz i'll be droppin D more than nice school teachers--
plus your a fag and you suck, so don't say you a thug--
fakeass-wearin a red shirt doesnt make you a blood--
you've been postin shit lately-beat me thats crazy--
I'ma take u out-cuz i don't need a playbook to play D--

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Voted For: DrasticMeasureZ

open: D:"YOUR UP FOR ONE KNOCK OUT PUNCH TO YA JAW
Nigga think he spittin cold punches but my hottness thaw’s (it)" -Nice meta. Likin it

close: D:"Like cell-phone ya bars of punches don’t have an signal its unable to reach me
Think u ill?…….. liar liar pant’z on fire I’ll give u period pains like an femine" again, good, on another level.

DrasticMeasurez best line: "If u ate an square candy still ya punches couldn’t burt me into stars ( starburst)
My words like an painter cause iam using your own blood to create art" this is good aswel

Mentaly Ill's: "plus your a fag and you suck, so don't say you a thug--
fakeass-wearin a red shirt doesnt make you a blood--" -Probably the best line. Was all ok tho.

Overall: Drastic's verse was real good and Mentally ill didnt match up. His use of personals was good but the verse just seemed weaker, with Drastc using good metaphors aswel as personals.

Unlucky Mentally Ill, iv no doubt you can be as good if not better than Drastic but not this time.

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THE SLEEP & THE DREAM-

SEE THAT EMPIRE WERD~!

P.S.A

COMING SOON-GODS BETRAYL
OUT NOW-THE SLEEP & THE DREAM

Ay return the favour, playas............................

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Voted For: Mentally Ill

YO MAN I GOTTA GIVE DIS SHIT TO U UR FLOW WAS BETTA UR RHYMES WAS BETTA ERTHING U DID WAS BETA EXCEPT U VOCAB...AND U ALSO HAD SOME NICE PUNCHES..BUT YEA THURR U GO

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

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Voted For: Mentally Ill

Mentally Ill

fuck ya basic flows-your whack just face it hoe--
dras refuses to step it up-otherwise he'd break his toes--

Alright Punch, Good Multies 5/10

those multis you should use, or at least try thinkin fool--
draz beatin me? he pulled it off.. of his list of things to do--

First Off, Your Saying Hes Gonna Beat You.. otha Than That This Had Good Multies.. 5/10

you couldn't possibly defeat me, ur rap tools weaker--
cuz i'll be droppin D more than nice school teachers--

Nice Personal, And Good Punch, But Bad Setup 7/10

plus your a fag and you suck, so don't say you a thug--
fakeass-wearin a red shirt doesnt make you a blood--

Um, Missed Personal.. This Wasnt The Greatest 3/10

you've been postin shit lately-beat me thats crazy--
I'ma take u out-cuz i don't need a playbook to play D--

Another Missed Personal, Stayed Good Wit Multies 5/10

-= Your Verse Had Nice Flow, And Nice Multies But Your Punches Wernt Up To Par. =--= Overall <<>> (5/10) =-

DrasticmeasureZ

YOUR UP FOR ONE KNOCK OUT PUNCH TO YA JAW
Nigga think he spittin cold punches but my hottness thaw’s (it)

That Was Really Poor Man .. 4/10

Ya punches aint hitting me cause ur writing on an soft pad
My rhymes are like an sharp scissor I’ll excrete ya rhymes to scrap
Wasnt Feelin this At All But Multies Were Ok 6/10

Kid says he’z mentally ill couldn’t be ill if u took so many pills
Calla me an quick sand cause iam leavin ya under with yo skillz
Naw Wasnt Feelin This Dun 5/10

If u ate an square candy still ya punches couldn’t burt me into stars ( starburst)
My words like an painter cause iam using your own blood to create art

Ehh This Was Ok, Better Than Your Rest. 5/10

Like cell-phone ya bars of punches don’t have an signal its unable to reach me
Think u ill?…….. liar liar pant’z on fire I’ll give u period pains like an femine

Not Good At All 5/10

-= Well This Verse Could Of Been Alot Better, But It Didnt Have Hard Hitting Punches <<>> Overall (5/10)


This Battle Came Down To Who Had The Best Line.. And
Mentally Ill Took It With..

-==-cuz i'll be droppin D more than nice school teachers-==-



Vote<<>> Mentally Ill

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