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GoD LiKe
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Essence of I
IP: 5B8D 6D5D
Essence of I
I am an atom a gene spliced directly from the first man adam. I am immortal for these words will carry me through all time portals I am powerful for i have command over two languages that are my pet animals I am a vagabond for my mind has been to the Greek and Roman empires and back to the future I am a deadbeat father with many offsprings because like a slug being discharged from a gun each thuoght from my brain is a son Yet i am nothing for God is the Alpha and Omega but I I am just the IT and inbetween the most powerful being I am high for my thoughts dwell in an elevated state of mind so you carry my thoughts from above within you for I am everywhere and anywhere i go my words leave a trace After all, I am also just an angel with a dirty face. Essence of I and My Innerself, ![]()
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Light Weight
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that was pretty dope man.You talked about some deep shit in that and your vid clip on the far right is very cool.Make it bigger lol.
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GoD LiKe
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IP: 947A 2011
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this had a lot of emotion into it, i was feeling this poem you wrote...
Yet i am nothing for God is the Alpha and Omega but I I am just the IT and inbetween the most powerful being I am high ^is like a reality check for sum people.. a form of realization.. very nice piece and i like how your structure is random, because most people think poetry has to be in stanzas or equal lines and rhyme, however it doesn't.. and the way you wrote this can be a guideline to future poets... if u don't get post of the month for your drops, then something is terribly wrong with RV... nice shit.. ![]() will peep your other works, i have an open mic called armegeddon in my sig (a long nice collab).. hit that up sum time. pz pz
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Back In Business
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werd... that's wussup...
nice shyt ice pick ras likes ya right flick you are a fan and my head is open as if an autopsy is being performed as you blow my mind like candles on a birthday cake... i am hungry and i must go eat now for food is waiting for me as my stomoch growls like starved animals abused by its owner who just came home who forgot to chain him up before he left the house for work i am a jerk...lmao... ctfu... nah just playing man... that shyt was hot as hell, man... keep up the ggod work... you're very talented... still can't get over how you hustled me and handed me my first ass whoopin' when i first got to the site, though... lmao |
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