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Old 09-27-04, 11:23 PM   #1
Ice Pick
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Essence of I

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Essence of I

I am an atom
a gene spliced directly
from the first man adam.
I am immortal
for these words will carry me
through all time portals
I am powerful
for i have command
over two languages
that are my pet animals
I am a vagabond
for my mind has been to the
Greek and Roman empires
and back to the future
I am a deadbeat father
with many offsprings
because like a slug
being discharged from a gun
each thuoght from my brain
is a son
Yet i am nothing
for God is the Alpha and Omega
but I
I am just the IT and inbetween
the most powerful being
I am high
for my thoughts dwell
in an elevated state of mind
so you carry my thoughts
from above within you
for I am everywhere
and anywhere i go
my words leave a trace
After all, I am also just
an angel with a dirty face.


Essence of I and My Innerself,
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Old 09-28-04, 12:28 AM   #2
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that was pretty dope man.You talked about some deep shit in that and your vid clip on the far right is very cool.Make it bigger lol.
You are a dope poet keep it up.
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Old 11-29-04, 05:08 PM   #3
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Old 12-01-04, 03:48 AM   #4
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this had a lot of emotion into it, i was feeling this poem you wrote...
Yet i am nothing
for God is the Alpha and Omega
but I
I am just the IT and inbetween
the most powerful being
I am high
^is like a reality check for sum people.. a form of realization.. very nice piece and i like how your structure is random, because most people think poetry has to be in stanzas or equal lines and rhyme, however it doesn't.. and the way you wrote this can be a guideline to future poets... if u don't get post of the month for your drops, then something is terribly wrong with RV... nice shit..
will peep your other works, i have an open mic called armegeddon in my sig (a long nice collab).. hit that up sum time. pz pz
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Old 12-01-04, 07:23 AM   #5
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werd... that's wussup...

nice shyt
ice pick
ras likes ya right flick
you are a fan
and my head is open
as if an autopsy is being performed
as you blow my mind
like candles on a birthday cake...
i am hungry
and i must go eat now
for food is waiting for me
as my stomoch growls
like starved animals
abused by its owner
who just came home
who forgot to chain him up
before he left the house for work
i am a jerk...lmao... ctfu...

nah just playing man... that shyt was hot as hell, man... keep up the ggod work... you're very talented... still can't get over how you hustled me and handed me my first ass whoopin' when i first got to the site, though... lmao
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