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11-26-04, 06:10 PM
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Only the Illist
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for my mother
IP: 1AF0 6ADD
this is an Open mic i did a long time back under my alias name bigpappa76, i have since added to it and revised it a little bit... please gives some feedback..... thanks....
___________________ This ones for the moms from of ya birth she was always by ya side she wanted to party but stayed home to seek and hide this ones for the moms of this world who wanted more but settled for less no one could ever expect you to keep it all inside on ya chest but you did, you never hated or scorned even when i fucked up in school you never for-lorned you stayed near to me and thats just beein real treated me like a fuckin king, would have givin me your last meal but i took you for granted... didnt even want to care you did your best with me, neglect? not even on a dare Always by ya side, there in each and every way woulda given her life before you saw a rainy day even when you actin like a fool she loved you like a jewel she coveted you and still you never bothered to let her know you this ones to the moms, the mothers of all the fuckups in the world the moms who stayed home on fridays rather that go out wit the gurls i know you could have done differant, i know you could have hated me could have called me a fuckup when i dropped out but you beleived in me and still i didnt care... i didnt see the love in your eyes didnt know that you would take a bullet before letting me die i was to busy beein filled with spite with my mind in a craze to know that you really did care and you all ways have each and every day this one goes out to all the moms who gave a shit the ones that went to little league to see there sons first hit for the moms who gave it all up for the love of that little face when some would have been gone with out a single trace Always by ya side, there in each and every way woulda given her life before you saw a rainy day even when you actin like a fool she loved you like a jewel she coveted you and still you never bothered to let her know you when i look back on my life so far, i dont see much but one thing stands true its that my mother will always be there no matter black skyes or blue life moves on, and the days just fuckin fly by never once have i thanked you, all this time ive been living a lie i know youll probably never see this rhyme, you may never even know but to my mom, i now see you for who you are and all the love you show ...this shit is for the moms who loved there child more than the sun its for the only real hommie you got in the end, the true only one to all the fuckups who feel alone and forgoten by this topsy turvey life know all you gotta do is go home, give her a hug and forget the strife this is for you mom, this is to say that im sorry for all ive done over the years im sorry for all the times i wasnt there, the times i made you shead tears i cant tell you how much you mean to me, not in a thousand songs but all i can say one more time is, this ones for the moms Always by ya side, there in each and every way woulda given her life before you saw a rainy day even when you actin like a fool she loved you like a jewel she coveted you and still you never bothered to let her know you |
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11-26-04, 06:38 PM
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IP: 0825 899A
Mmm, Flow Was Consistant Nothing Special Though...
I Like The Concept, Whole 2pac Type Ish... It Was A Heart Felt Piece... Nice Emotion And Content... Maybe Just Improve Ya Flow Alittle... Then It'd Be Perfect... Good Job Overall Though... .One. |
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11-26-04, 11:39 PM
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Only the Illist
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IP: 1AF0 6ADD
yo lets get some feedback people... been looked at 16 times but 1 feed
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11-26-04, 11:42 PM
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mess with me get cooked
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IP: 6A7C EE47
Aiiiiiigh Fam Like Ab Said..........its Nuttin Special.........deep Emotional Shit I Was Feeling Coming From The Heart.............flow Is An Lil Chopped Up Work On That And Vocab'z U Need Them Fam...........7/10 Vocab'z And Flow Is An Must Homie
Drop An Om Feedback In Mines "diss To This Nigga At Skool-smoke" Drop An Feedback Like I Dropped On Urs Peace
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SEE THAT EMPIRE WERD~!  P.S.A COMING SOON-GODS BETRAYL OUT NOW-THE SLEEP & THE DREAM |
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11-27-04, 02:28 AM
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Whys That?
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IP: 5285 DC82
nice drop. deep ass content, rhyme's are allright.
keep dropping. return the feed, link in my sig |
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