One verse of my new track.. So look out for it real soon.. Im just releasing it here because I have a fucked up cold and I cant record tonight.. So I hope you like it..

Its kinda weird looking at the rap game, from outside..
Trying to define, what’s hot and what’s not, brakes my spine..
I find the ignorant people who’s hating on rap music..
Is waiting, hearing Chingy & Ja Rule abuse it..
Or losing it, from all the harsh beef that’s constantly started..
By rap artists, who got heart for pop charts & markets..
I’m Stressing their just investments, treated like Guinnie pigs..
Simply product of a recipe born and dead quick..
Ever since Pac died, the image of commercialism..
Followed a certain system, so distant to first visions..
How raps created and how ya sposed to make it..
They just fake it, for cheap thrills, the moneys there for the taking..
I’m aching to see some emcees step to the plate..
And send the rest of the wanna-bees, straight through the exit gate..
To show these fucking idiot kids, what raps really about..
Fuck judging us from MTV, get that BS out..
I see less clout, with making bad false assumptions..
Cause these obstructions anger me, more then morbid abductions..
Some commercial productions, get the problems mixed up..
Thinking pop is what we want, but not really giving a fuck..
About our music, just the other day, I watch a TV show..
Some dumb ass hoe said rap emotionally blowed..
Its that sort of statement, that really makes my head explode..
Leaves me with little hope, if times are changing their to slow..
Its bullshit..

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Its kinda weird looking at the rap game, from outside..
Trying to define, what’s hot and what’s not, brakes my spine..
/\ nice rhyming there good opener

I find the ignorant people who’s hating on rap music..
Is waiting, hearing Chingy & Ja Rule abuse it..
/\ So so true

Or losing it, from all the harsh beef that’s constantly started..
By rap artists, who got heart for pop charts & markets..
/\ nice bar there

I’m Stressing their just investments, treated like Guinnie pigs..
Simply product of a recipe born and dead quick..
/\ Nice rhyming again

Ever since Pac died, the image of commercialism..
Followed a certain system, so distant to first visions..
/\ word

How raps created and how ya sposed to make it..
They just fake it, for cheap thrills, the moneys there for the taking..
/\ some deep lyrics there these are very good so far

I’m aching to see some emcees step to the plate..
And send the rest of the wanna-bees, straight through the exit gate..
/\ WORD

To show these fucking idiot kids, what raps really about..
Fuck judging us from MTV, get that BS out..
/\ W33RD

I see less clout, with making bad false assumptions..
Cause these obstructions anger me, more then morbid abductions..
/\ Dope rhyming

Some commercial productions, get the problems mixed up..
Thinking pop is what we want, but not really giving a fuck..
/\ Word

About our music, just the other day, I watch a TV show..
Some dumb ass hoe said rap emotionally blowed..
/\ nice flow

Its that sort of statement, that really makes my head explode..
Leaves me with little hope, if times are changing their to slow..
/\ nice closer

Its bullshit..
/\ when u put this into echo try and use an echo feature for this small bit

Overall
This was a dope piece some real drama and emotion behind this hopefully there will be more verses but the flow was real easy to follow fuck structure if this is a writing for an audio the lyrics and meaning behind it were dope...assonance was used...and used to perfection...this grants an 8.5/10 from me...and thats good i ws very impressed with this piece.

Please view my open mic in my sig plz...

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shit is tight, cant wait till i hear it on audio, everything was there....and tupac aint dead...lol

peace

check out my first topical when you get a chance
thanks
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...56&page=1&pp=15