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Old 11-30-04, 08:56 AM   #1
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It's Like Voices In My Head Tellin Me To Write/It's Like Choices I Coulda Made Or Phantom Ghosts In Da Night/It's Like Things Never Done Dat People Said They'd Do/It's Like Da Pain I Feel When I Think Of You/It's Like Riding A Roller Coaster And Waiting For The Drop/It's Like Cooking A Pizza On A Pot Top/It's Like Holding A Pen And Writin Shit Down/It's Like Everybody Thinkin U Get Around/It's Like Sayin "I Love You" And It's Truly Meant/ It's Like Holding Anger Inside Unable To Vent/It's Like Making People Laugh And Laughing Your Self/It's Like Seein Someone Hurt And Being Unable To Help/It's Like Talking To Someone That U Can't See/It's Like Walking With Someone U Want To Be/It's Like Being Around All Your Loved Ones At Once/It's Like Being Smart But Being Labeled A Dunce/It's Like Being In Love For The First Time/It's Like Getting A Dollar When U Asked For A Dime/It's All Of These Things And More/If U Want To Find Out What It Is, Than What Are U Waiting For?
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Niggas Wanna Sign Her And Make Her Dey Wife
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Old 11-30-04, 02:31 PM   #2
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i liked the flow of this.it was a very touching piece.i gotta read it again to see what it's like but nice drop.keep em comin'
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Old 11-30-04, 03:30 PM   #3
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wasnt bad .......flow was ok
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