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01-03-05, 07:28 PM | #1 | |
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J~FOUR vs <..8..>
IP: C458 B454
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01-03-05, 07:29 PM | #2 | |
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IP: C458 B454
J~FOUR has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-03-05 07:29 PM.
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01-03-05, 07:29 PM | #3 | |
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IP: 9E82 AEB5
<..8..> has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-03-05 07:29 PM.
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01-03-05, 07:46 PM | #4 | |
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IP: C458 B454
You lame, cause ya name gettin R.I.P'ed from The Game
Cause i got "4 red dots round ya body" like "charecters in ya name"[1] .... Damn, Face the facts, before you get ransacked wit macs cause J Just "Ate Eight(88)" Like "Dale Jarret BackPacks"[2] .... N You Get More "Flipped Birds" than "Gymnastic Sparrows" Cause I "Tear You From The Middle" But Im "Just Following Arrows"[3] .... So No Double You For You, Unless You Wanna Get Impaled Cause you like "Mexican Call Girls" the Way You "Pickin up El's"[4] [1]He Has Four Dots In His Symbol As His Name.. [2]Wordplay.. 88 Dale Jarrets Number He's A Nascar Driver.. [3]His Arrows Are Pointing Away From his Body, Thus Stretching His Middle Out.. [4]wordplay.. Els=guys.. El=spanish..mexicans=spanish.. Dont Understand My Shit Now.. Dont Vote Nuff Said..
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01-03-05, 07:50 PM | #5 | |
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IP: 9E82 AEB5
you weak with yah flows, sorta like eerkle with the-hoes/
i'm gettin all the bitchez and yur steady jurkin yah-hose/ yur to slow to match the witt that i'm spittin, get-back/ we got an equal text record but really yur only-half, do the-math/ break it, roll it, light it, then smoke it, focus, you about to get broke kid/ i'mah leave you bloody and dyin. blood all over you, soakin/ yur too herbish, yah weak to bleak and too-faded/ like mcdonalds meat, yah shit is too out-dated/ |
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01-03-05, 07:55 PM | #6 | |
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IP: C458 B454
Well Thats A Rap For You... Call Me Out And Come With That Weak Ass Shit..
Fuck These Noobs.. ROTLMFAO.. thanks for the win duke..
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01-07-05, 05:03 PM | #7 | |
you gotta hear me again
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This was feedback posted for J~FOUR
IP: A97A 1CDB
check polls.......................................
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01-07-05, 05:03 PM | #8 | |
you gotta hear me again
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IP: A97A 1CDB
waste of time lol............................0,0 lol
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02-05-05, 04:52 PM | #9 | |
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IP: 258C A279
Voted For: J~FOUR
You lame, cause ya name gettin R.I.P'ed from The Game Cause i got "4 red dots round ya body" like "charecters in ya name"[1] decent opener Damn, Face the facts, before you get ransacked wit macs cause J Just "Ate Eight(88)" Like "Dale Jarret BackPacks"[2] decent punchline wasn’t hard hittin though N You Get More "Flipped Birds" than "Gymnastic Sparrows" Cause I "Tear You From The Middle" But Im "Just Following Arrows"[3] pretty good here, punch landed So No Double You For You, Unless You Wanna Get Impaled Cause you like "Mexican Call Girls" the Way You "Pickin up El's"[4] weak closer though, wasn’t feelin it you weak with yah flows, sorta like eerkle with the-hoes/ i'm gettin all the bitchez and yur steady jurkin yah-hose/ decent opener yur to slow to match the witt that i'm spittin, get-back/ we got an equal text record but really yur only-half, do the-math/ weak punch, aint feelin it break it, roll it, light it, then smoke it, focus, you about to get broke kid/ i'mah leave you bloody and dyin. blood all over you, soakin/ doesn’t rhyme here, weak punch also yur too herbish, yah weak to bleak and too-faded/ like mcdonalds meat, yah shit is too out-dated/ decent punch line here… Overall J~FOUR took this one, came harder in the Punches and the flow was good with it, and the Vocab + structure was good, overall J~F came Way harder than 8
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02-05-05, 05:02 PM | #10 | |
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IP: 31E1 91F6
Voted For: J~FOUR
this was a good battle...i think j four took this one with a better all around verse. he had good structure,punches,mettas,wordplay,vocab,personals. ..and all that. he just came out on top to me in this was. i was feelin his verse more too, but close battle. 8-u had a good verse, but i think u came a lil too soft, and it seemed like u threw a bunch of barz together, and wasnt really focusin on ur oponent...u shouldve came wit harder punches, and mettas, but i think u had a aight verse. u had some good multies in there, but i think thats not enough. u got skillz tho... overall-i think this was a close battle, but j just came out on top in this one...yall both got skillz, hit up that NOK forum, and drop a tryout...we want talent like yall's... and yall plz Return tha vote favor, cause i took my time out to vote on this one, and make it xplained plz ~1~ |
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02-05-05, 05:38 PM | #11 |
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IP: EB8D 9EAC
Voted For: J~FOUR
8.............. you weak with yah flows, sorta like eerkle with the-hoes/ i'm gettin all the bitchez and yur steady jurkin yah-hose/ played played played.......3/10 yur to slow to match the witt that i'm spittin, get-back/ we got an equal text record but really yur only-half, do the-math/ lol nice...i liked this...had to think about it for a sec....but good concept here...8/10 break it, roll it, light it, then smoke it, focus, you about to get broke kid/ i'mah leave you bloody and dyin. blood all over you, soakin/ not good.....4/10 yur too herbish, yah weak to bleak and too-faded/ like mcdonalds meat, yah shit is too out-dated/ not too good of a closer....but better than some of your bars....5/10 overall....................20/40 J four........ You lame, cause ya name gettin R.I.P'ed from The Game Cause i got "4 red dots round ya body" like "charecters in ya name"[1] good play off name....nice opener...7/10 .... Damn, Face the facts, before you get ransacked wit macs cause J Just "Ate Eight(88)" Like "Dale Jarret BackPacks"[2] nice wordplay here....most wont get this....7/10 .... N You Get More "Flipped Birds" than "Gymnastic Sparrows" Cause I "Tear You From The Middle" But Im "Just Following Arrows"[3] another good play off of name....8/10 .... So No Double You For You, Unless You Wanna Get Impaled Cause you like "Mexican Call Girls" the Way You "Pickin up El's"[4] decent closer here......7/10 overall......29/40 J fours just came with harder punches.....more complex....just all around a better verse.....RETURN THE FAVOR PLEASE.....link in sig....thanks
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02-06-05, 02:20 PM | #12 | |
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IP: 34D2 D886
Voted For: J~FOUR
8: you weak with yah flows, sorta like eerkle with the-hoes/ i'm gettin all the bitchez and yur steady jurkin yah-hose/ ^^not a bad opener..... yur to slow to match the witt that i'm spittin, get-back/ we got an equal text record but really yur only-half, do the-math/ nice punch attempt for the second half.. lol break it, roll it, light it, then smoke it, focus, you about to get broke kid/ i'mah leave you bloody and dyin. blood all over you, soakin/ first half was wack, try flowin another way, you dun have to put EMPTY multis in your verse.. it serves no purpose.. yur too herbish, yah weak to bleak and too-faded/ like mcdonalds meat, yah shit is too out-dated/ aight closer nothing too special.... J~Four: You lame, cause ya name gettin R.I.P'ed from The Game Cause i got "4 red dots round ya body" like "charecters in ya name" ^^nice opener, good personals.... Damn, Face the facts, before you get ransacked wit macs cause J Just "Ate Eight(88)" Like "Dale Jarret BackPacks" ^^nice personal again.. lol funny shit ha ha.. N You Get More "Flipped Birds" than "Gymnastic Sparrows" Cause I "Tear You From The Middle" But Im "Just Following Arrows" most creative in the battle.. nice metaphors and good use of personals.. BEST bar so far.. So No Double You For You, Unless You Wanna Get Impaled Cause you like "Mexican Call Girls" the Way You "Pickin up El's" nice closer and the best in the battle.... You don't have to explain your bars.... it's understood wit the " "....... and stop numbering and spacing ya bars.. obviously you not a newbie.. not wit this type of content.. fix that up, cuz your verse is really good.. Good luck you two, but J Four you took this one.. 1
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02-10-05, 10:46 AM | #13 |
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IP: 4792 68BF
Voted For: J~FOUR
j four took this shit easily 8 had some basic shit no hard hitting punches need i explain any more? You Get More "Flipped Birds" than "Gymnastic Sparrows" Cause I "Tear You From The Middle" But Im "Just Following Arrows haha
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